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Array ( [sid] => 132248 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => krazy girl [time] => 2007-03-01 00:02:44 [hometext] => another older one [bodytext] => you want me to write you a song
about what we've had for so long
and our baby that we've lost
we have nothing for the cost
for this i still cannot let go
i must thrive with what i know
when i am with you i seem complete
though i don't feel like i can compete.
how can you ever think this is done
when there is a love like this one?
thoughts of you and me taken away
kindof gives me comfort in a way
but i would never trade it for your face
i'd have to go down in this human race.
she wants to be free from worry
as she takes my temporary sanity
i desolve myself in this bitterness
cause this misstress is what i miss
i dont want to love you this much
though i love your painful touch
this beloved pain
brings temporary gain
but the deepness of this hole
is beginning to tare my soul
though this makes me smile
i cannot do this for a while.
if i can't prove this to me
how can i show anybody
it will be hard cause i am addicted
and for this love i've been afflicted.
she wants to be free from worry
as she takes my temporary sanity
i desolve myself in this bitterness
cause this misstress is what i miss
but the deepness of this hole,
though this makes me smile,
is beginning to tare my soul
so i cannot do this for a while [comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 48 [informant] => one11 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
krazy girl

Contributed by one11 on Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 12:02:44 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



you want me to write you a song
about what we've had for so long
and our baby that we've lost
we have nothing for the cost
for this i still cannot let go
i must thrive with what i know
when i am with you i seem complete
though i don't feel like i can compete.
how can you ever think this is done
when there is a love like this one?
thoughts of you and me taken away
kindof gives me comfort in a way
but i would never trade it for your face
i'd have to go down in this human race.
she wants to be free from worry
as she takes my temporary sanity
i desolve myself in this bitterness
cause this misstress is what i miss
i dont want to love you this much
though i love your painful touch
this beloved pain
brings temporary gain
but the deepness of this hole
is beginning to tare my soul
though this makes me smile
i cannot do this for a while.
if i can't prove this to me
how can i show anybody
it will be hard cause i am addicted
and for this love i've been afflicted.
she wants to be free from worry
as she takes my temporary sanity
i desolve myself in this bitterness
cause this misstress is what i miss
but the deepness of this hole,
though this makes me smile,
is beginning to tare my soul
so i cannot do this for a while




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Re: krazy girl (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 09:29:51 AM AEST
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Filled with feeling and a good painful write I do like the verse" she wants to be free from worry as she takes my temporary sanity." thank you


Re: krazy girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 01:29:08 PM AEST
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Great wording, I love this piece
the way you write the way I read
I just feel I can relate.




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