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RELEASING HIM !!!
Contributed by
Aims
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Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 04:31:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i loved him like no one else ,
wanted to share every second with him,
was eager to know how life went by,
even when i was not there,
cared about knowing every single detail.
was always waiting to hear,
the sweetest words of love to kill my fear,
feelings are there, i know
but sometimes you need to be assured to go.
then,one time he asked me to release him,
i cried...like i`ve never cried before,
but then i realized.....
he doesn`t love me any more!!
so,although to me our souls were one,
releasing him was all i could`ve done.
and now he is coming back saying"I REGRET"!!
asking me to forget,
what he`ve done to me ,
and forgive him that easily?!!
sorry, my love who used to be so,
i can`t close my eyes to the wrong i saw,
sorry,i released you,
so release me too!
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Re: RELEASING HIM !!!
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by Loriann on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 04:39:30 PM AEST
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This was a very good write. Nice job expressing how hard it can be.
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Re: RELEASING HIM !!!
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by SeXyDrAgOn on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 04:51:37 PM AEST
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| great expression of your feelings, I really felt this write. great job |
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