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You Are My Little Love Note . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 03:41:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You
are my
little love note
'tis you i love to read,
a word or two of i love you
is all i ever
need.
My
sweet and
dreamy love note
who tell's my heart
so much,
every
kiss
a
sylable
every word's a
touch.
You
are my
little love poem
i've come to memorize,
you
are the heart
of dickenson with
with shakespeere in your
eyes.
You
are my little love note
with your phrase of charming bliss,
and so to thee a note from me
i wrote upon our
kiss.
Ben
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myheartsvoice
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2007-02-28 15:41:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: You Are My Little Love Note . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by Loriann on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 04:23:39 PM AEST (User
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This is absoulutely beautiful. I would love to have so much love between and someone else as you have expressed in this poem. I was honored to have been able to read this. Outstandingly beautiful.
Loriann
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Re: You Are My Little Love Note . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by SeXyDrAgOn on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 04:53:43 PM AEST (User
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oh that is sooo sweet I love it so much!
You
are my
little love note
'tis you i love to read,
a word or two of i love you
is all i ever
need.
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Re: You Are My Little Love Note . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by SeXyDrAgOn on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 04:55:40 PM AEST (User
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I wanted to say that that was my favorite part it drew me in and I keep sitting here reading it all over and over! I accidentally hit Ok before I wrote that all! |
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Re: You Are My Little Love Note . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 07:17:34 PM AEST (User
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Easy metaphor for me to reconcile as both the written word & love are of the most poweful forces to exist for us to draw on...
Great job!
BLMP
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Re: You Are My Little Love Note . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by needledancing on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 11:05:22 PM AEST (User
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Sometimes love just has to be simple...and simple is uncomplicated in todays world so simple and uncomplicated it shall be well done thank you |
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Re: You Are My Little Love Note . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 11:08:59 AM AEST (User
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Awww isn't love wonderful?
Perfect words well done ...
Im in love with being in love its wonderful
Dee xx |
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Re: You Are My Little Love Note . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 12:08:32 PM AEST (User
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such passion and devotion.. I love this.. its funny you said about the notes.. I leave my bf stuff like that every morning too and write him poems.. this is wonderful!!
vampyress Jenni |
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