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Array ( [sid] => 132170 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Falling [time] => 2007-02-26 22:48:38 [hometext] => Comments are always welcome even if you didint like the poem state why or whatever you feel [bodytext] =>



I feel myself falling; falling hard onto the cold wood floor, it hurts so bad right down to my core.

You told me it would never ever happen again because of the marks it left on my golden caramel skin.

My holy body that your suppose to worship. But instead you want to smash it up!

Broken bones, broken nose, as the blood flows and flows. Our child walks in and sees mommy holding her face.

You tell our child who is only but 4 that mommy’s nothing but a disgrace. Why would you tell our child such horrible things?

Why do you hate me so?? Why do you give me deathblow after deathblow?

What is it that I have done so wrongly in my life to deserve such hurtful pain that you’ve given to me
I have been the best wife that I could possible be, but I know however you would disagree.

So I guess you will do fine all by yourself now. Because all this pain I have endured, I will no longer allow.

So yeah you say I will fall flat on my ass but I will be falling because I tripped from being blissful and beautiful

Life is what you once raped from me so to speak
Made me the unique woman I am today

Each day Ive been blessed to be woken up I kneel down and pray

So my body hit the cold hard floor but temple has healed and moved on to further increase its growth
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 22 [informant] => SunRaise [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Falling

Contributed by SunRaise on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:48:38 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove






I feel myself falling; falling hard onto the cold wood floor, it hurts so bad right down to my core.

You told me it would never ever happen again because of the marks it left on my golden caramel skin.

My holy body that your suppose to worship. But instead you want to smash it up!

Broken bones, broken nose, as the blood flows and flows. Our child walks in and sees mommy holding her face.

You tell our child who is only but 4 that mommy’s nothing but a disgrace. Why would you tell our child such horrible things?

Why do you hate me so?? Why do you give me deathblow after deathblow?

What is it that I have done so wrongly in my life to deserve such hurtful pain that you’ve given to me
I have been the best wife that I could possible be, but I know however you would disagree.

So I guess you will do fine all by yourself now. Because all this pain I have endured, I will no longer allow.

So yeah you say I will fall flat on my ass but I will be falling because I tripped from being blissful and beautiful

Life is what you once raped from me so to speak
Made me the unique woman I am today

Each day Ive been blessed to be woken up I kneel down and pray

So my body hit the cold hard floor but temple has healed and moved on to further increase its growth




Copyright © SunRaise ... [ 2007-02-26 22:48:38]
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Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 11:52:22 PM AEST
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I'm so glad thiscame to a go end.
Stay strong and hang tuff.
big huggss,
emy
So many of these never come to a good ending as they run out of time.
Keep the faith in yourself.


Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 09:51:00 AM AEST
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this is a very inspirational write.. and well said.. I am glad you got out of the situation and realized that no one deserves abuse. some people are just weak and like to beat on women because they don't like themselves. this is a very good write

vampyress Jenni




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