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Array ( [sid] => 132152 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If you [time] => 2007-02-26 16:27:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If you could only see what this is doing to me
If you could only feel exactly what I’m feeling
You might understand how much I wanted us to work

I know I caused this
I just never knew I could miss a person as much as I miss you
I think about you until I think I’m going to burst from the pain

I want just what is lost because
This is tearing me apart
Not being with you

I know were still friends
But it’s not even close to being the same
I hear your voice on the telephone and it makes me cry inside

How am I am supposed to make this hurt stop
Will it ever stop?
I know I will never be the same again

I wonder how you feel
Almost every time we talk
But I know you don’t want to talk about it

You say it’s in the past
It doesn’t matter anymore
I just wish I knew if you hurt as much as I do
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Adrianna [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
If you

Contributed by Adrianna on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 04:27:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



If you could only see what this is doing to me
If you could only feel exactly what I’m feeling
You might understand how much I wanted us to work

I know I caused this
I just never knew I could miss a person as much as I miss you
I think about you until I think I’m going to burst from the pain

I want just what is lost because
This is tearing me apart
Not being with you

I know were still friends
But it’s not even close to being the same
I hear your voice on the telephone and it makes me cry inside

How am I am supposed to make this hurt stop
Will it ever stop?
I know I will never be the same again

I wonder how you feel
Almost every time we talk
But I know you don’t want to talk about it

You say it’s in the past
It doesn’t matter anymore
I just wish I knew if you hurt as much as I do




Copyright © Adrianna ... [ 2007-02-26 16:27:00]
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Re: If you (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 04:29:39 PM AEST
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wow this is a very powerful piece.. you can feel the pain of the past in this.. you could ask this friend.. and sometimes things are better left in the past.. at least you still have your friend.. which is better than nothing.. very good on expression

vampyress jenni


Re: If you (User Rating: 1 )
by Sena on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 06:33:08 PM AEST
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nice write. I can relate to this.




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