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Array ( [sid] => 132145 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Screaming Your Name. [time] => 2007-02-26 11:46:53 [hometext] => I wonder if she can hear me....and if she can....I wonder if she cares... [bodytext] =>

I've never been the type to turn my back and run
It's just never appealed to me to be the same as everyone
I bled a love thats true as I watched you walk away
And even though I can no longer see you through the black
I'm gonna scream your name until you come back
Every day hurts like a knife through my chest,
But loving you is what feels the best
It's like playing with fire
Knowing I'm gonna get burned
But I'm not concerned
Cuz I'd do anything for you
Despite it all, no matter what
Pushed aside, Left behind, forced to hide
I'm falling down, I'm lost inside
And I know you won't be waiting
But I can't turn back
So I'm gonna scream your name until you come back
I'm so broken, I'm so tired of falling
I'm screaming your name, can you hear me calling?
Every breath I take is one less moment of my life
You left me here drowning inside this sorrow
How would you feel if I died tomorrow?
Ya see my veins are running dry from bleeding through my eyes
Spilling all the tears I've cried
It's taking every bit of me to keep this all inside
But I'm so in love with you that I can't turn back
So I'm gonna stand hear screaming your name...
Until you come back.

...I miss you Luci... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 22 [informant] => bleedthelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 29 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Screaming Your Name.

Contributed by bleedthelove on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 11:46:53 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I've never been the type to turn my back and run
It's just never appealed to me to be the same as everyone
I bled a love thats true as I watched you walk away
And even though I can no longer see you through the black
I'm gonna scream your name until you come back
Every day hurts like a knife through my chest,
But loving you is what feels the best
It's like playing with fire
Knowing I'm gonna get burned
But I'm not concerned
Cuz I'd do anything for you
Despite it all, no matter what
Pushed aside, Left behind, forced to hide
I'm falling down, I'm lost inside
And I know you won't be waiting
But I can't turn back
So I'm gonna scream your name until you come back
I'm so broken, I'm so tired of falling
I'm screaming your name, can you hear me calling?
Every breath I take is one less moment of my life
You left me here drowning inside this sorrow
How would you feel if I died tomorrow?
Ya see my veins are running dry from bleeding through my eyes
Spilling all the tears I've cried
It's taking every bit of me to keep this all inside
But I'm so in love with you that I can't turn back
So I'm gonna stand hear screaming your name...
Until you come back.

...I miss you Luci...

Copyright © bleedthelove ... [ 2007-02-26 11:46:53]
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Re: Screaming Your Name. (User Rating: 1 )
by Loriann on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 02:45:23 PM AEST
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This was very emotional. I feel your pain I have been here. I can say time heals all wounds.

Loriann

Re: Screaming Your Name. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 04:27:37 PM AEST
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wow this is so emotional and the pain just rips at you as a reader but it was so well expressed. this is a beautiful write but ever so sad.. I loved the wording.. great job

vampyress jenni

Re: Screaming Your Name. (User Rating: 1 )
by Adrianna on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 04:29:55 PM AEST
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I love it. You make the reader feel exactly what you are feeling, very well written

Re: Screaming Your Name. (User Rating: 1 )
by Sena on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 06:35:51 PM AEST
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wow...this was a beautiful read! Luci should realize how lucky she is! thx for sharing.

Re: Screaming Your Name. (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 08:56:06 PM AEST
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so sad, so well written. it conveys how much you really are "drowning inside this sorrow". i can really feel your emotion. hope the sorrow begins to fade soon.

Re: Screaming Your Name. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th November 2009 @ 09:27:05 AM AEST
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this was my favorite line...Ya see my veins are running dry from bleeding through my eyes

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