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The rains of red oh how they spread upon the largest space.
The grass became a shade of black and felt like slime to touch.
The waters now were bitter and not ingested much.
The earth gave off a putrid smell and raised a noxious gas.
No food could grow upon the earth or feed the hungry mass.
You’ve done with me said Mother earth I’ve had enough of you.
Your lack of all you’ve done to me, I now shall show I’m through.
I’ll rid my back of all my ills and that shall be the end.
I thought that we would make it but you are not my friend.
You’ve taken every morsel with your greed and heartlessness.
I show you now this barren place were you shall lay to rest.
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Earths Reward

Contributed by needledancing on Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 10:05:52 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

The largest cloud of blue appeared upon the earth’s sick face,
The rains of red oh how they spread upon the largest space.
The grass became a shade of black and felt like slime to touch.
The waters now were bitter and not ingested much.
The earth gave off a putrid smell and raised a noxious gas.
No food could grow upon the earth or feed the hungry mass.
You’ve done with me said Mother earth I’ve had enough of you.
Your lack of all you’ve done to me, I now shall show I’m through.
I’ll rid my back of all my ills and that shall be the end.
I thought that we would make it but you are not my friend.
You’ve taken every morsel with your greed and heartlessness.
I show you now this barren place were you shall lay to rest.

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Re: Earths Reward (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 10:15:59 PM AEST
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Very well done.
big huggs,
emy

Re: Earths Reward (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 10:50:40 PM AEST
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Ah dear friend this is a dark vision. It just may be the Earth is smarter than we who inhabit and it is certainly more incumbent of us to plan for great shifts and changes as she rights herself than to gather profit & wealth for a select few.

Well Done

Peace
Yang

Re: Earths Reward (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:03:52 AM AEST
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I think you are so right
The darkness here really brings out the message
another excellent write

Re: Earths Reward (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 09:37:56 PM AEST
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well written and so true.. this is well expressed.. great job

vampyress jenni

Re: Earths Reward (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:35:43 PM AEST
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A most esential write in defence of our great planetary home in which may render us all homeless sooner than we think.

Ben

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