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Array ( [sid] => 132077 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Paperback Scrawl. [time] => 2007-02-24 19:48:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Amidst her most toxic flaw
She still manages to leave me in awe
Through promises broken
And words unspoken
She brings the light of day
Still manages to keep me captivated in every way
Born a blessing, a cure to the curse
Stuck in the words and the verse
I traverse the skies
Traveling through vague notions
Twisted in devotion
I bring storms to my ocean
For she is the sand
I long to crash my waves into the body of her land
Understand...
This is more than just a poetic prose
This is so much more deeper than anybody knows
It flows and grows
Bleeds through and shows
Never give up this fight
Wrap my body around her life
Never lose sight
Let my soul take flight
Bleed the ink I write
This is beautiful
This is true
And I just wanna say that I...
I love you.





...ShesMyInspiration...
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 2 [informant] => bleedthelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Paperback Scrawl.

Contributed by bleedthelove on Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 07:48:55 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Amidst her most toxic flaw
She still manages to leave me in awe
Through promises broken
And words unspoken
She brings the light of day
Still manages to keep me captivated in every way
Born a blessing, a cure to the curse
Stuck in the words and the verse
I traverse the skies
Traveling through vague notions
Twisted in devotion
I bring storms to my ocean
For she is the sand
I long to crash my waves into the body of her land
Understand...
This is more than just a poetic prose
This is so much more deeper than anybody knows
It flows and grows
Bleeds through and shows
Never give up this fight
Wrap my body around her life
Never lose sight
Let my soul take flight
Bleed the ink I write
This is beautiful
This is true
And I just wanna say that I...
I love you.





...ShesMyInspiration...




Copyright © bleedthelove ... [ 2007-02-24 19:48:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Paperback Scrawl. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 08:02:32 PM AEST
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Well I have no clue who she is but if she reads this write you'll have no problem. you certainly melted me to the core with these magic words.
Wwwooooooooooooo.
big smiles,
emy


Re: Paperback Scrawl. (User Rating: 1 )
by musicXisXlife on Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 02:35:46 AM AEST
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Oh my. This is amazing. Took my breath away.


Re: Paperback Scrawl. (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 04:09:49 AM AEST
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This is amazing, such potent images: 'bleed the ink I write' and 'I long to crash my waves into the body of her land' gave me goosebumps. Great write,

Dom


Re: Paperback Scrawl. (User Rating: 1 )
by SaintzAndSinnerz on Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 10:40:18 AM AEST
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Wowww. I'm pretty sure you took everyones breath away with this one. Somebody needs to put a microphone in front of you, you could melt an entire audience, i LOVE this poem.


Re: Paperback Scrawl. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 11:16:47 AM AEST
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this just flows so perfectly together.. it sounds like a love song. beautifully written and i absoluetely love the expression and the ending awesome job

vampyress jenni




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