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If

nothing

is perfect

then how can it be?

a love such yours

ever came to

me.

But

your more

than perfection

or even the best,

in my heart you

are light years

above the

rest.

In

my eyes

your beauty

will alway's prevail,

next to you i dare say

even angel's would

pale.

At

time's

when your

out and we are apart

a trembling feeling enter's my heart,

i think to my self this is how it could be

living alone with no one but

me.

Then

you enter my view

as you open the door as

i look in your eyes i'm in love

once more, for what is

perfection?

if

not

you and i,

in

love

with each other

untill we

die.

Ben

the artist formerly known as

myheartsvoice
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If Not You And I . . . Ben

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 04:27:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

If

nothing

is perfect

then how can it be?

a love such yours

ever came to

me.

But

your more

than perfection

or even the best,

in my heart you

are light years

above the

rest.

In

my eyes

your beauty

will alway's prevail,

next to you i dare say

even angel's would

pale.

At

time's

when your

out and we are apart

a trembling feeling enter's my heart,

i think to my self this is how it could be

living alone with no one but

me.

Then

you enter my view

as you open the door as

i look in your eyes i'm in love

once more, for what is

perfection?

if

not

you and i,

in

love

with each other

untill we

die.

Ben

the artist formerly known as

myheartsvoice

Copyright © myheartsvoice ... [ 2007-02-23 16:27:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: If Not You And I . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 05:30:26 PM AEST
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Thanks for personalizing it for us.
She really has to be the best. Hold on to her, I love reading this.

I don't know why, the only person I ever loved died years ago. I seldom use her now day, I used to write only dark, And now days it's just frustration with the world being consumed with whats less than we started with.

Maybe thats it, Your words take me back to some one I could write like that to.
I still have my muse, years away, but now it's more loneliness and I loss all meaning.

Thanks for writting so well on the topic of ya'll love. It's a bandaid to my scars

Re: If Not You And I . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 05:58:09 PM AEST
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Aww & Double Awww...This counts as a two for one deal, as I'm reading this w/ a friend who doesn't understand why we can't give you 10 stars, lol! I guess that says it all*wink*

I'd also like to make mention just how much I enjoyed the previous comment made which speaks to me of a soul touched by anothers words...& that's just beautiful! I gotta' believe that's what it's all about!

Right on!

BLMP~Me

Re: If Not You And I . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 10:37:32 PM AEST
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What a strong, beautifull luv you two have blessed with.
Awesome writing.
Big huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: If Not You And I . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 02:02:06 AM AEST
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Wow..very impressive and very sweet.
venkat

Re: If Not You And I . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 03:03:24 AM AEST
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Hey mystery man lol!

Another delightful write as always your love poems are always a moving treasure to behold.

~Michelle~

Re: If Not You And I . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 06:15:09 AM AEST
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The day grew lighter and my heart awakened..and the love flowed through my pen...love again.....fresh, new, exciting...

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