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Array ( [sid] => 13202 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Weeping [time] => 2003-02-24 08:40:00 [hometext] => the wait for spring, the wait for love [bodytext] =>
clouds weep
of love's lament,

recycled tears
rain on empty branches,

wooden statues bathed in rain,
standing stoic, no one listening,

brittle bones cast in ice
this too cold winter,

shivering beneath,
will they bear fruit again?

strings of heart
serenade this longing soul,

waiting anxiously,
one more moon, full in face,

come and go, count the days,
the kiss of spring returning leaf by leaf,

paint by number, fill the empty page,
fill me up, with you again

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 22 [informant] => sunflower [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Weeping

Contributed by sunflower on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 08:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

clouds weep
of love's lament,

recycled tears
rain on empty branches,

wooden statues bathed in rain,
standing stoic, no one listening,

brittle bones cast in ice
this too cold winter,

shivering beneath,
will they bear fruit again?

strings of heart
serenade this longing soul,

waiting anxiously,
one more moon, full in face,

come and go, count the days,
the kiss of spring returning leaf by leaf,

paint by number, fill the empty page,
fill me up, with you again

Copyright © sunflower ... [ 2003-02-24 08:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Weeping (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 10:51:04 AM AEST
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Well done on this I too am waiting for a new spring morning to awaken me! Christina

Re: Weeping (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 01:43:31 PM AEST
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wonderful poem reads well. I can feel your feelings by reading it. Keep writing!!

Re: Weeping (User Rating: 1 )
by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 10:06:26 PM AEST
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seasons relating to love... a great metaphor great piece of work... just wonderin how would you relate fall to love... winter to love... summer to love??? you don't have to answer im just curious what others think

Re: Weeping (User Rating: 1 )
by sunflower on Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 10:48:44 PM AEST
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not sure, have to think, cant right now,
thanks for some inspiration,
im sure ive written of love during the other seaosns, i will check :)

Re: Weeping (User Rating: 1 )
by boxer791 on Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 10:32:46 AM AEST
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I think yor poem was really good, and like your other poems.

Re: Weeping (User Rating: 1 )
by Sybil on Saturday, 23rd April 2011 @ 02:36:53 PM AEST
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Nice! Very original.

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