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To tell us of your great news
But all I could do was think
Of how I saw your life to be

You sounded so happy
But I could not be
Even though it is a blessing
And you wanted me to be

I could not bring myself
To say I was happy for you
You are so young
I could not believe
What has been done

I know I will be happy
Once you return home
Knowing that you are safe
Because they are such a blessing

No matter what has happen
I could never turn you away
Because I will always love you
For this I have always told you

So I wait for your safe return
To our perishes and loving home
So we once again cherish you
As we once did before

We welcome this new addition
To our family with open arms
What blessing this child will make
We will love this child the same
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New Addition

Contributed by sadaddy on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 06:18:47 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

We received a call today
To tell us of your great news
But all I could do was think
Of how I saw your life to be

You sounded so happy
But I could not be
Even though it is a blessing
And you wanted me to be

I could not bring myself
To say I was happy for you
You are so young
I could not believe
What has been done

I know I will be happy
Once you return home
Knowing that you are safe
Because they are such a blessing

No matter what has happen
I could never turn you away
Because I will always love you
For this I have always told you

So I wait for your safe return
To our perishes and loving home
So we once again cherish you
As we once did before

We welcome this new addition
To our family with open arms
What blessing this child will make
We will love this child the same

Copyright © sadaddy ... [ 2007-02-22 18:18:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: New Addition (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 06:30:32 PM AEST
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One call feel your luv-n-dedication in this write.
There's also much wisdom in these precious words. For who ever, I'm sure you will be eternally cherished for this masterpeice.
big huggs,
emy

Re: New Addition (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 06:32:51 PM AEST
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Go, Grandpa...w/ all the accepting love already in place...how could this new addition be anything other than gifted in you as their grandpa, Go Grandpa!

BigLove&Please, keep caring soooo much!
~Me

Re: New Addition (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 11:28:56 PM AEST
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very interesting write, the flow of words were outstanding.
FRANCO.

Re: New Addition (User Rating: 1 )
by one11 on Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 10:21:16 AM AEST
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i feel your emotion in this, it's very profound.

Re: New Addition (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 01:44:27 AM AEST
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A love unconditional and I feel this so deeply. A moving masterpiece you have created here. I enjoyed this a great deal.

Michelle

Re: New Addition (User Rating: 1 )
by Oneir8dude on Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 10:27:16 PM AEST
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A baby having a baby... This makes me feel how
lucky I am... Although I get stressed when a boy
comes within 20 feet from Megan...

I tell ya my friend... in everything you write I feel your pain but, most of all I see your love for your daughter... And I know you don't sit and think of the words, they jst come... I am always praying for you my friend...

Bill
(Life's lesson can only be lived not learned)
Eventually she will see the ill's of her ways...
keep lovin'

Re: New Addition (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th March 2007 @ 09:44:39 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. not everyone is happy when a new arrival is expected and this conveyed that emotion very well!

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