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Somewhere

in my desolation

you were watching me,

a

painting

of discolration

wilting by the sea.

A

drifter

going nowhere

like a verse without

a rhyme,

a faceless clock that couldn't

smile let alone keep time.

yet

you were

with me all along

so beautiful to see,

my angel in the mist

who took away my

misery.

As

slowly

as a sunrise

as sure as time and tide,

i saw my life within your eyes

and you were by my

side.

Yes

that angel

in the mist who

shared with me her

charms, because of

her sweet kiss is

now the angel

in my

arms.

myheartsvoice

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Angel In The Mist

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 03:25:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Somewhere

in my desolation

you were watching me,

a

painting

of discolration

wilting by the sea.

A

drifter

going nowhere

like a verse without

a rhyme,

a faceless clock that couldn't

smile let alone keep time.

yet

you were

with me all along

so beautiful to see,

my angel in the mist

who took away my

misery.

As

slowly

as a sunrise

as sure as time and tide,

i saw my life within your eyes

and you were by my

side.

Yes

that angel

in the mist who

shared with me her

charms, because of

her sweet kiss is

now the angel

in my

arms.

myheartsvoice

Copyright © myheartsvoice ... [ 2007-02-22 15:25:05]
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Re: Angel In The Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by Pebbles345 on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 03:31:33 PM AEST
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Touching, and refreshingly beautiful. I absolutely love it.

Sincerely,
Pebbles

Re: Angel In The Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 03:50:16 PM AEST
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beautiful poem as always.
It's good to hear love speak

Re: Angel In The Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 06:50:16 PM AEST
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I've taken to feeling quite Victorian w/ all the swooning involved as I read of your devotion!*wink*

Great job, sweetie!

BLMP,
~Me

Re: Angel In The Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 04:01:45 AM AEST
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I enjoyed its beauty.. venkat

Re: Angel In The Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 05:28:08 AM AEST
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beautiful write. absolutely loved this. nicely done.

Re: Angel In The Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 09:27:46 AM AEST
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beautifully done.. another well penned out piece.. all I can say again is WOW just lovely

vampyress Jenni

Re: Angel In The Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 10:58:40 AM AEST
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As always a beautiful heartfelt poem. I love reading your work,

Dom

Re: Angel In The Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by Loriann on Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 11:53:09 AM AEST
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This was very beautiful very good work of art.

Loriann

Re: Angel In The Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 12:15:52 AM AEST
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Awesome as always.
Big huggs,
emy

Re: Angel In The Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by SeXyDrAgOn on Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 04:57:21 PM AEST
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I love your style and all the emotion that goes into each of your writes, I am drawn to everything about your poetry.

Re: Angel In The Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by EternitysLyre on Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 10:12:19 PM AEST
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It strikes me as curious that your well-defined rhythm which is largely trochaic hexameter with a spondee in one place or another (look 'em up, it's fun to say the words like you know what they mean--I would know), but your stanzas are big fat diamonds that stretch out them out into kite-like formation. Do tell---ending on a poignant word is understandable, but breaking lines unevenly and such should have some author's intent fueling it. I'm curious.

~EL

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