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Array ( [sid] => 131958 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I would love to stab you [time] => 2007-02-21 14:25:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Not liking who I’ve become,
Wishing to be numb.
You make me crazy,
Everything feels so hazy.

Sometimes,
I wish I could rip out,
Your heart and stamp on it.
Break it.
Make you hurt like me,
Do you understand me, yet?
Are we part if a sure bet?

You’re like this darkness inside my heat,
You can make me feel like a dirty little tart.
Your darkness is addictive,
Sometimes its all I can do to live.
Yet it feels like its devouring me,
So please tell me, how this could be?

I would love to stab you,
Give you instant pain,
Make you turn purple and blue.
But there would be nothing to gain.

You are my addiction,
My darkness,
Even sometimes my tormentor.

DP

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I would love to stab you

Contributed by little_genna on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 02:25:35 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Not liking who I’ve become,
Wishing to be numb.
You make me crazy,
Everything feels so hazy.

Sometimes,
I wish I could rip out,
Your heart and stamp on it.
Break it.
Make you hurt like me,
Do you understand me, yet?
Are we part if a sure bet?

You’re like this darkness inside my heat,
You can make me feel like a dirty little tart.
Your darkness is addictive,
Sometimes its all I can do to live.
Yet it feels like its devouring me,
So please tell me, how this could be?

I would love to stab you,
Give you instant pain,
Make you turn purple and blue.
But there would be nothing to gain.

You are my addiction,
My darkness,
Even sometimes my tormentor.

DP

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Re: I would love to stab you (User Rating: 1 )
by Malcolmsdreamgirl on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 02:56:04 PM AEST
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Painful read .... nicely put together tho

Ihope you find peace out there someday

Dee xx

Re: I would love to stab you (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 05:20:39 PM AEST
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this has such intense emotions in it.. sounds like you were hurt pretty bad.. sometimes some people aren't good for you.. but i really liked the expression in this piece alot.. great job

vampyress Jenni

Re: I would love to stab you (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 07:20:44 PM AEST
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oh I feel ya
I know the pain
well done.

Re: I would love to stab you (User Rating: 1 )
by Inevitable on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 02:14:48 AM AEST
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sounds like you were mad ***** when you wrote this

Re: I would love to stab you (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 06:13:29 AM AEST
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line 11 is meant to read
Are we part of a sure bet?

and line 12 is
You’re like this darkness inside my heart,

Re: I would love to stab you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 12th January 2008 @ 01:39:52 AM AEST
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Well my idea wouldn't be a knife but I do know what these feelings are. I just cut the losses and went on with life.
awesome writing, my friend.
Hang tuff.
big huggs,
emy

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