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Array ( [sid] => 131940 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To my dear friend [time] => 2007-02-20 23:15:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>

I know your days seem dark…
And relief won’t seem to start…

Your pain is the worse you’ve felt…
Asking for God’s grace you knelt…

It feels that our father denied you…
And he didn’t pull you through…

It seems he only takes the kind…
And pays the harmful no mind…

In fact, he has been with you all the while…
Urging you to raise your head and smile…

For he would soon take the pain away…
And add sunlight to your gloomy day…

When things seem so far down…
And the days weigh on your crown…

I ask that you raise your head…
And listen to what he has said…

The signs are always there…
If you look they are everywhere…

Maybe he sent me….
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To my dear friend

Contributed by oneir8dude on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 11:15:57 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous





I know your days seem dark…
And relief won’t seem to start…

Your pain is the worse you’ve felt…
Asking for God’s grace you knelt…

It feels that our father denied you…
And he didn’t pull you through…

It seems he only takes the kind…
And pays the harmful no mind…

In fact, he has been with you all the while…
Urging you to raise your head and smile…

For he would soon take the pain away…
And add sunlight to your gloomy day…

When things seem so far down…
And the days weigh on your crown…

I ask that you raise your head…
And listen to what he has said…

The signs are always there…
If you look they are everywhere…

Maybe he sent me….



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Re: To my dear friend (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 11:53:02 PM AEST
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oneir8dude, I liked this poem lots as the message is so real and the way it is presented to your readers is perfect. I just had to reach back out through this comment and thank you for sharing such an inspirational poem and for giving us all a little more of you. Excellent job.

Your Friend
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: To my dear friend (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 02:28:42 AM AEST
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Nice one Bill. Its nice to think someone is watching over us. And its also nice to think someone is sent to take care. Beautiful poem. Sue x


Re: To my dear friend (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 04:45:04 AM AEST
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Good work, friend.
Big huggs,
emy


Re: To my dear friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 04:59:58 AM AEST
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You are an earthly angel my friend. Its comforting to know that there is always someone watching over us. Your friend is very lucky & blessed to have such a wonderful, loving, supportive and caring friend like yourself Bill~
A beautiful write penned from the heart.
much love n hugs,
sue m


Re: To my dear friend (User Rating: 1 )
by annoiosa on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 07:56:30 AM AEST
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Luv it :)


Re: To my dear friend (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 06:37:41 PM AEST
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Oh my friend Bill, I know each time that I read one of your poems it will be inspirational to me. I know that you truly write from the heart and everytime our pin hits the paper. This truly brought a smile to my face and some peace to my heart. Thank you for sharing.

sadaddy


Re: To my dear friend (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 02:24:58 AM AEST
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I think he did send you and I hope your friend knows how blessed they are to have you near. I sure know I do.

This brought a happy tear or two to my eyes tonight. Lighting a warm fire within the soul.

hugsssssss
~Michelle~


Re: To my dear friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 01:30:34 AM AEST
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What a lovely write. The picture is the perfect touch,

Whisper


Re: To my dear friend (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 29th September 2009 @ 12:38:07 PM AEST
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Very beautiful...honest and from the heart. Your heart, man. Full of love. Honored to call you my friend. :)
Peace and hugs~
Me




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