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Array ( [sid] => 131913 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A DULL BRUTE! [time] => 2007-02-20 06:48:05 [hometext] => BRUTES LIKE ME TOO HAVE THEIR SHARE OF LOVE... [bodytext] =>
Among the cattle, I battled
far beyond my mind recall,
from infancy to adolescent and to
my adulthood with cattle, I battle.

It was one such morning, when
clouds lined by gold, heart felt bold,
and my spirit rose a hundred fold to fight
my way into her heart to take-hold.

Knowing not the expression of love; I ‘m
a cattle-man who only know to plow, held her
tender hand with the might I could muster; saw
trickling tears in her eyes; I assumed it for hate
or worse.

Penalizing me for being a brute fool,
rolled my heart into aching burl,
locked my soul inside a gloomy barn,
life I thought was just dark and barren.

It was one such pale morning
as I was battling with the cattle, I saw
through the slender fog came my beautiful lass
with grace, an odd fear on her face.

“Hold not my hand” she begged, “but my life, for
I love thee with all my tender heart, but hold not my hand,
b’cause I ‘m not a cattle you battle,
love is not a street brawl but a divine marvel.”

I leaped with joy as if a young calf - swept her
up in my arms; she giggled “you…my dull bull…”
FRANCO. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 2 [informant] => FRANCO [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
A DULL BRUTE!

Contributed by FRANCO on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 06:48:05 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry




Among the cattle, I battled
far beyond my mind recall,
from infancy to adolescent and to
my adulthood with cattle, I battle.

It was one such morning, when
clouds lined by gold, heart felt bold,
and my spirit rose a hundred fold to fight
my way into her heart to take-hold.

Knowing not the expression of love; I ‘m
a cattle-man who only know to plow, held her
tender hand with the might I could muster; saw
trickling tears in her eyes; I assumed it for hate
or worse.

Penalizing me for being a brute fool,
rolled my heart into aching burl,
locked my soul inside a gloomy barn,
life I thought was just dark and barren.

It was one such pale morning
as I was battling with the cattle, I saw
through the slender fog came my beautiful lass
with grace, an odd fear on her face.

“Hold not my hand” she begged, “but my life, for
I love thee with all my tender heart, but hold not my hand,
b’cause I ‘m not a cattle you battle,
love is not a street brawl but a divine marvel.”

I leaped with joy as if a young calf - swept her
up in my arms; she giggled “you…my dull bull…”
FRANCO.




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Re: A DULL BRUTE! (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 10:30:16 AM AEST
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Bravo Franco we all have it in us....surprise.
I enjoyed this write as I do all your work...write, write....Thanks


Re: A DULL BRUTE! (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 10:35:52 AM AEST
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Being Italian I have acquired a quid pro quo approach and it works well here. Juggling cattle & battle with dull bull was chunky at first but worked more effectively then first surmised as I had a big wide smile upon rereading for 'love is a divine marvel' though brawling fools we encounter.

Well Done

Peace
Yang


Re: A DULL BRUTE! (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 11:09:44 AM AEST
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Well some bulls aren't so bad......lol......Yes, very good write. Loved the whole.......


Brew~


Re: A DULL BRUTE! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 02:30:39 PM AEST
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Well, heck, FRANCO, I'd have t' call ya a true "cowboy" from India! Wow! A true Indian cowboy. I really enjoyed this mighty fine piece o' work.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy


Re: A DULL BRUTE! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 06:33:19 AM AEST
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Very sweet.
big huggs,
emy


Re: A DULL BRUTE! (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 07:57:08 PM AEST
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Awwww....Beauty & the Beast, or would that be, Beauty & the Beast herder? teehee...

This was wondrously romantic!

BigLoveMuchPeace
~me




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