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Array ( [sid] => 131912 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Youg little rebel [time] => 2007-02-19 23:59:02 [hometext] => Being a rebel with no cause... Ive had to put my energy else where or go no where... . for all the young rebels out there.... this is for you. [bodytext] => Young little rebel, hold your head high
Your trouble your in, let out your sigh
Its the beginning for you, do not fail
Your life full of gold, prepare to set sail

Your running with your booze
Knowing you cant snooze
Wait untill they find you soon
And give you what they call your orange shiny spoon

Articulate unseen
With words that are keen
This game you play it has no end
Slow down now, so things start to mend

Young rebel bless it be
Your heart remains true, this i can see
Take what youve learned and use it to grow
Never loose what you have, always stay bold
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Lemont_D_Vaan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Youg little rebel

Contributed by Lemont_D_Vaan on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 11:59:02 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Young little rebel, hold your head high
Your trouble your in, let out your sigh
Its the beginning for you, do not fail
Your life full of gold, prepare to set sail

Your running with your booze
Knowing you cant snooze
Wait untill they find you soon
And give you what they call your orange shiny spoon

Articulate unseen
With words that are keen
This game you play it has no end
Slow down now, so things start to mend

Young rebel bless it be
Your heart remains true, this i can see
Take what youve learned and use it to grow
Never loose what you have, always stay bold

Copyright © Lemont_D_Vaan ... [ 2007-02-19 23:59:02]
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Re: Youg little rebel (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 11:00:16 AM AEST
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Lemont_D_Vaan, I liked both the structure and the message within this composure by you. I think we have all had a little rebellion in us at some point in our lives as we must conform to a point but never totally lol. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem and yourself with us all.

Mickey Pig Knuckles

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