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Array ( [sid] => 131900 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Monster You Created [time] => 2007-02-19 19:59:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You ask me to maintain
well that's insane
you want me to pretend
that everything's okay
as common sense melts away,
you cut me
you bleed me
verbally abuse
and as you do it
you seem really amused.

You say I'm to sensitive
when I ask you
not to mention
secrets I revealed
that I have forever concealed,
you say you miss me
as you kiss me
and when I say I need you too
you start emotionally whipping me.

There's been a transformation
the last mixture you used was to strong
though I am so off balanced
I don't care anymore.
Ssshhh
to the voices whispering
I'm no longer listening....
emotions are hidden
all feelings are now forbidden,
expect no mercy
from the monster you created
just bend over
cause it's your turn to take it. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 43 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

The Monster You Created

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 07:59:25 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

You ask me to maintain
well that's insane
you want me to pretend
that everything's okay
as common sense melts away,
you cut me
you bleed me
verbally abuse
and as you do it
you seem really amused.

You say I'm to sensitive
when I ask you
not to mention
secrets I revealed
that I have forever concealed,
you say you miss me
as you kiss me
and when I say I need you too
you start emotionally whipping me.

There's been a transformation
the last mixture you used was to strong
though I am so off balanced
I don't care anymore.
Ssshhh
to the voices whispering
I'm no longer listening....
emotions are hidden
all feelings are now forbidden,
expect no mercy
from the monster you created
just bend over
cause it's your turn to take it.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2007-02-19 19:59:25]
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Re: The Monster You Created (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 08:28:24 PM AEST
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Well done. Strong sentiment well crafted and
compelling. You write well nicely done.

Thank you kindly for your comment also.

myheartsvoice

Re: The Monster You Created (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 08:52:53 PM AEST
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i can really to what your saying here.
you did great on this write
take care

Re: The Monster You Created (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 12:49:31 AM AEST
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unknown_utopia, once again you feed your readers with your creative words of wonderful poetry. I really like this one and its message as I know for sure many readers will be able to relate. Thank you once again for giving us a little more of you which many of us crave.

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Mickey Pig Knuckles

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Re: The Monster You Created (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 04:27:09 AM AEST
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Woooooooo darlin,
Remind me to never ***** you off.
I know u ain't talkin to me 'cause we have never kissed, sigh.
Big smiles,
Great writin as always.

Re: The Monster You Created (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 11:47:11 AM AEST
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Now that's tellin em...great well vented and can I borrow this for some of my ex's...Good write!

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