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Array ( [sid] => 131899 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The broken [time] => 2007-02-19 16:47:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => In love with the broken
Always trying to fix oneself
Entangled in the tear drops of failure
Leaving salt to taste the times

I drank the
Water

I eat the
Bread

I venture forth
And burn the lines

Forever with the dead
Home of this insignificant port
Entertwinded with the drops of failure
Leaving salt to taste the tears

I drank
Reality

I ate the
Lie

I venture forth
to feel the time

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The broken

Contributed by rhei76 on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 04:47:18 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

In love with the broken
Always trying to fix oneself
Entangled in the tear drops of failure
Leaving salt to taste the times

I drank the
Water

I eat the
Bread

I venture forth
And burn the lines

Forever with the dead
Home of this insignificant port
Entertwinded with the drops of failure
Leaving salt to taste the tears

I drank
Reality

I ate the
Lie

I venture forth
to feel the time

of the broken

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2007-02-19 16:47:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The broken (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 05:13:11 PM AEST
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there are the broken and he fixers...thank goodness...I have no problem with the broken as long as they don't break me. Good piece makes you think.....are you a fixer or a broken?

Re: The broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 05:56:04 PM AEST
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hmmm very interesting piece
makes you think
good rite

Re: The broken (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 08:04:46 PM AEST
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Interesting Indeed
well done

Re: The broken (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 12:52:31 PM AEST
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a very powerful piece reminds me of some of my older stuff.. I like the expression in this .. great job

vampyress jenni

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