Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 18:10:13 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 131883 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Ivory Thorn [time] => 2007-02-19 07:22:00 [hometext] => Symbolism is a treat, yes? [bodytext] => I walk into a cold room
A flower on the ground
The sides are lined with thornes
Like razors all around

The petals; ivory color
The texture; that of silk
It looked disturbed yet beautiful
The stem begins to wilt

It won't admit the beauty
That's raining from it's stem
I try to get ahold of it
It tries to let me in

My hand can't bare to break it
It's stronger than it looks
I've never seen perfection
Like this; not even in books

I let go of the flower
I walk out of the room
I wish there was a way to prove this
To everyone I knew

I hope the flower knows this
It's better than the rest
And how I'd love to hold its
Beauty to my chest

I hope he knows the flower
Is a symbol of his grace
I hope this eyes will light up
When he sees my face

I hope this "us" will last a while
'Cause he's the best I've had
In the realm of all the good
I cannot find the bad

So shall I read this poem?
And tell him how I feel?
I know this boy's amazing
These feeling for him are real

I walk into the room again
The flower's with one more
This time it's with a blackened rose
Tangled to the core

It's brought this rose out of the soil
The black and white shall blend
The ivory one's not wilting
The stems' aligned again

And what I've said is mischief
And all these words get lost
I want this "us" to be well used
Without one speck of dust

So now I leave the flower
The two are sweet to see
I love how you're the ivory
And the blackened rose is me [comments] => 2 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 2 [informant] => xXdeadXpoetXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
My Ivory Thorn

Contributed by xXdeadXpoetXx on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 07:22:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I walk into a cold room
A flower on the ground
The sides are lined with thornes
Like razors all around

The petals; ivory color
The texture; that of silk
It looked disturbed yet beautiful
The stem begins to wilt

It won't admit the beauty
That's raining from it's stem
I try to get ahold of it
It tries to let me in

My hand can't bare to break it
It's stronger than it looks
I've never seen perfection
Like this; not even in books

I let go of the flower
I walk out of the room
I wish there was a way to prove this
To everyone I knew

I hope the flower knows this
It's better than the rest
And how I'd love to hold its
Beauty to my chest

I hope he knows the flower
Is a symbol of his grace
I hope this eyes will light up
When he sees my face

I hope this "us" will last a while
'Cause he's the best I've had
In the realm of all the good
I cannot find the bad

So shall I read this poem?
And tell him how I feel?
I know this boy's amazing
These feeling for him are real

I walk into the room again
The flower's with one more
This time it's with a blackened rose
Tangled to the core

It's brought this rose out of the soil
The black and white shall blend
The ivory one's not wilting
The stems' aligned again

And what I've said is mischief
And all these words get lost
I want this "us" to be well used
Without one speck of dust

So now I leave the flower
The two are sweet to see
I love how you're the ivory
And the blackened rose is me




Copyright © xXdeadXpoetXx ... [ 2007-02-19 07:22:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: My Ivory Thorn (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 04:57:36 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
this is absolutely beautiful....so well done..I went ahhhh at the end...The two are sweet to see.I love how you're the ivory and the blackened rose is me. I have learned that in life others mirrow who we are....so you see you are really that ivory flower....surprise!


Re: My Ivory Thorn (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 04:59:40 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
nicely wrote.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com