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Daughters

....A Little Touch of Heaven....

SultryRose's Signatures

The last straw she couldn't cope
She's seeing the end of her rope.
Her chin finally felt cold ground.
Tears came, thought she'd drown
but, but, but

All of a sudden...........
split asunder.........
Twas higher than a sunomy.
Yeah, all of a sudden, split asunder
Jus fell down and split asuunder.
repeat

She was alone with many tears
Always dedicated thru them years.
Oh but when you're down so low
Up is the only way you can go.

Even super woman has limintations.
Get a grip, feel life vibrating.
Your now stronger up now than down.
Watch out wolrd she's spinning round.

A country gal can't stay down long.
Where would Our Planet get songs?
She may go down once again.
Jus remember super women can spin.
For my gal Marty
4 eva luv,
yomomma

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SPLIT ASUNDER

Contributed by emystar on Sunday, 18th February 2007 @ 10:47:18 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

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Daughters

....A Little Touch of Heaven....

SultryRose's Signatures

The last straw she couldn't cope
She's seeing the end of her rope.
Her chin finally felt cold ground.
Tears came, thought she'd drown
but, but, but

All of a sudden...........
split asunder.........
Twas higher than a sunomy.
Yeah, all of a sudden, split asunder
Jus fell down and split asuunder.
repeat

She was alone with many tears
Always dedicated thru them years.
Oh but when you're down so low
Up is the only way you can go.

Even super woman has limintations.
Get a grip, feel life vibrating.
Your now stronger up now than down.
Watch out wolrd she's spinning round.

A country gal can't stay down long.
Where would Our Planet get songs?
She may go down once again.
Jus remember super women can spin.
For my gal Marty
4 eva luv,
yomomma

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2007-02-18 22:47:18]
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Re: SPLIT ASUNDER (User Rating: 1 )
by Oneir8dude on Sunday, 18th February 2007 @ 11:05:28 PM AEST
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Very Nice Emy....
Every time I read your lyrics I hear 80's rock music...

And in my eyes that's not a bad thing....

Good momma

Bill

Re: SPLIT ASUNDER (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 12:07:49 AM AEST
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emystar, I really liked the message within these lyrics as this type of situation is more common than we would like to beleive. Thank you for both sharing your love of writing and sharing your creative personality with all of us.
Very well done.

Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: SPLIT ASUNDER (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 11:27:49 AM AEST
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wow emy what an awsome write.
your a great mom

take care

hugs

Re: SPLIT ASUNDER (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 01:12:43 PM AEST
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wow that is beauitful what a wonderful momma you are!! beautifully done

vampyress jenni

Re: SPLIT ASUNDER (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 03:41:42 PM AEST
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Listen to 'yomomma' and all will be better. Much hugs and many blessings to the sweetest heart here on YPDC please offer Marty a pen to work out any bouts with ink.

Blessings

Peace
Yang

Re: SPLIT ASUNDER (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 03:45:24 PM AEST
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Wisdom passed along...with a heart full of love is the only wisdom there is...you have the wisdom and a heart full of song. Can't think of anyone who doesn't hear messages in the songs.Keep your words singing.....thanks.

Re: SPLIT ASUNDER (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 08:58:12 PM AEST
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Once again a clasic
wisdom passed is golden knowledge.

Re: SPLIT ASUNDER (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 04:41:40 AM AEST
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Sweet lady Emy, Marty is so lucky to have a beautiful loving momma like yourself. My mother was so different, she never understood what I was going through so I battled it out on my own. Marty has your support, love n care. Sadly depression affects 1 in every 3 individuals.
A song from the heart, I like the message you send across in your lyrics.
Very well written my sweet & dear friend. I have missed you so and I hope & pray that all is good n well with you & yours.
much love, hugs n prayers,
sue m

Re: SPLIT ASUNDER (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 07:20:08 PM AEST
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You haven't lost the beat and are still right on key. beautiful poetry you are writting still. My
guess is you always will.

myheartsvoice

Re: SPLIT ASUNDER (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 12:44:11 AM AEST
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Marty is fortunate to have a friend like you emy~
May God bless and keep you both in His good graces.. for evermore~

B

Re: SPLIT ASUNDER (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 09:29:59 PM AEST
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Emy .. your love and compassion are a thing of beauty!

Marty is a lucky girl to have a mother who loves her
and is there for her through everything. You, my friend
are a real inspiration ~

*hugs you tight*

~Breezy

Re: SPLIT ASUNDER (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 08:44:50 AM AEST
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A country gal can't stay down long.
Where would Our Planet get songs? Oh have you got that right. this is a great poem on a most private and hidden subject. nicely done emy i enjoy reading your poetry or songs either way there always full of wisdom and insight. nice workf.

Ben

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