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Array ( [sid] => 131851 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thorazine Dreams [time] => 2007-02-17 17:13:18 [hometext] => Wails of anguish are never as desperate as when they are YOURS..................... [bodytext] => Thorazine Dreams

I watch in horror as the needle slides in
But really the horror only now begins
For now I’m locked in total restrain
Nowhere to hide or run from the pain

I only cried out to let them all know
My demons were loosed, again from below
No hell is as hellish if one can just scream
But now in my silence, dread stalks my dream

Do legions of evil cough out their glee
Does the stench come from them, or is it me
Can they be right, is this just in my mind
NO it is REAL, MY GOD they’re all blind!

As tortures pile, I cringe at the weight
Crushing my chest, I MUST suffocate
Eyes open wide, staring at fear
Fear learing back, and no one to hear

Trembling starts as the drug grows weak
My whimpering cries again rise to a shriek
One hour, two? How long has it been
I watch in horror as the needle slides in
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Thorazine Dreams

Contributed by feralpen on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 05:13:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Thorazine Dreams

I watch in horror as the needle slides in
But really the horror only now begins
For now I’m locked in total restrain
Nowhere to hide or run from the pain

I only cried out to let them all know
My demons were loosed, again from below
No hell is as hellish if one can just scream
But now in my silence, dread stalks my dream

Do legions of evil cough out their glee
Does the stench come from them, or is it me
Can they be right, is this just in my mind
NO it is REAL, MY GOD they’re all blind!

As tortures pile, I cringe at the weight
Crushing my chest, I MUST suffocate
Eyes open wide, staring at fear
Fear learing back, and no one to hear

Trembling starts as the drug grows weak
My whimpering cries again rise to a shriek
One hour, two? How long has it been
I watch in horror as the needle slides in




Copyright © feralpen ... [ 2007-02-17 17:13:18]
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Re: Thorazine Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 10:24:33 PM AEST
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interesting poem, i really like it. love the imagery. good job ^^


Re: Thorazine Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 11:13:59 PM AEST
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I have seen Thorazine administered to adjudicated individuals who once dosed no longer carried any responsibility for their behavior. I stopped one so diagnosed from stabbing another with a makeshift shank while on the cafeteria lunch line by catching his hand and getting cut in the palm. My palm twitched upon reading and as I remembered after they sewed me up I stayed on shift never showing zero weakness but while he was in lock down I hummed & sang a bit to calm my nerves. A couple of years later I saw that person on the street preforming a cover of the Chili Peppers Otherside:

"How long, how long will I slide
Separate my side I don't
I don't believe its bad..."

Thank you for posting this as its excellence further heals an old wound.

Peace
Yang


Re: Thorazine Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 18th February 2007 @ 12:02:01 AM AEST
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so sad to me
reminds me of what i had to go through with my husband.

take are


Re: Thorazine Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 03:33:52 PM AEST
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Pointed and sharp, in more ways than one!


Re: Thorazine Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 03:44:30 PM AEST
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cold and touching
what one could only feel....


Brew~


Re: Thorazine Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 04:37:43 PM AEST
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As a nurse...I have been at the restraining end of people who have required medication. I often wondered how it must be for those recieving such cold non therapeutic help...thanks for you descriptive piece and insight...one day we will all be wiser on how to help those in pain.




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