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Array ( [sid] => 131823 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Masterpiece Destiny~ [time] => 2007-02-16 22:53:16 [hometext] => We are all Karmic Artists whose Masterpiece is Destiny... [bodytext] =>

Alas...the universes vibrational content~

an omni~present collection of all to it lent

Which has only ever reflected for us in kind~

the decision & deeds by which our lives are defined...

So as the menaced state now on it inflicted~

has in turn becomes ours, who are by it depicted

For the crimes against self & others we perpetrate~

return unto us alone as damnable fate...

Yet, were consideration we to extend in this~

the opportunity to have a hand in not miss

Then might even the willfully blind come to see~

We are all Karmic Artists whose Masterpiece is Destiny...

~PHILOSOTRY~ [comments] => 5 [counter] => 361 [topic] => 21 [informant] => misfitme [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 35 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

~Masterpiece Destiny~

Contributed by misfitme on Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 10:53:16 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Alas...the universes vibrational content~

an omni~present collection of all to it lent

Which has only ever reflected for us in kind~

the decision & deeds by which our lives are defined...

So as the menaced state now on it inflicted~

has in turn becomes ours, who are by it depicted

For the crimes against self & others we perpetrate~

return unto us alone as damnable fate...

Yet, were consideration we to extend in this~

the opportunity to have a hand in not miss

Then might even the willfully blind come to see~

We are all Karmic Artists whose Masterpiece is Destiny...

~PHILOSOTRY~

Copyright © misfitme ... [ 2007-02-16 22:53:16]
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Re: ~Masterpiece Destiny~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Chamaron on Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 10:58:27 PM AEST
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This is beautiful and deep, the last line sealing it off perfectly. Absolutely well done.

Re: ~Masterpiece Destiny~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 09:51:58 AM AEST
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Oh my KerryLynne! That last line is immensely powerful!!!

Karma is a commanding and, at times, overwhelming
notinon, yes? Your words strike a chord in the hearts
of those who would emotionally embrace life in all its
glory and shame. What we send out to the universe,
ultimately comes back .. of this I am certain!

Excellent job, here.

~Breezy

Re: ~Masterpiece Destiny~ (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 10:18:27 PM AEST
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I mentally spun into a world where I was a Comic Scientist with a Daily Blog-Berry's entry a hand held effort to change the world so I created the Pope-on-a-Rope with instructions to wash here and this way in case of feeling sinful or repairing damaged goods.
I then realized I was fantasizing to the hypnotic pace of this piece and it hit me this is another way of saying "You Create Your Own Reality" or so I surmised.

Peace
AJ

Re: ~Masterpiece Destiny~ (User Rating: 1 )
by FrogHoppin on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 11:51:41 PM AEST
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*INSTANT KARMAS GONNA' GET CHA'..."-John Lennon

but, I think the meat of this truth lies here...

"& We All Shine On
Like the Moon & the Stars & the Sun
Yes, We All Shine On, On & On & On..."

Re: ~Masterpiece Destiny~ (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 12:54:33 AM AEST
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Again you touch a nerve with your literary intensity, A most provacitive peice this is not to mention the inner aggitation of these words that seek out answers. beautifuly
presented.

myheartsvoice

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