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Array ( [sid] => 131770 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When will you say I love you? [time] => 2007-02-15 14:43:35 [hometext] => Just hoping that I'll hear it one day..... [bodytext] => When will you say I love you?
We've been together for four years now
And yet those three little words still elude you
I've given birth to your two children and still somehow
Those three little words never cross your lips
I wonder do they cross your mind or heart
Those words are a big commitment but
Isn't having a child together an even bigger one
I'm not pressuring you because I'm not like that
But in my heart and mind I'm saying I love you
And patiently waiting for the day when I'll hear
Babe, I love you too. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 43 [informant] => suzy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

When will you say I love you?

Contributed by suzy on Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 02:43:35 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

When will you say I love you?
We've been together for four years now
And yet those three little words still elude you
I've given birth to your two children and still somehow
Those three little words never cross your lips
I wonder do they cross your mind or heart
Those words are a big commitment but
Isn't having a child together an even bigger one
I'm not pressuring you because I'm not like that
But in my heart and mind I'm saying I love you
And patiently waiting for the day when I'll hear
Babe, I love you too.

Copyright © suzy ... [ 2007-02-15 14:43:35]
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Re: When will you say I love you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Malcolmsdreamgirl on Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 02:55:03 PM AEST
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Oh My Goodness...... am I reading correctly? FOUR YEARS TWO CHILDREN LATER ? and No I love you? ALARM BELLS RING ....

Wait for your next most passionate intimate moment together and in your throws of passion tell him you love him .... and await his response ......

( Then e-mail me what happened! )

Good luck you lovely person you ...
I love you ... as a friend
Dee xx

Re: When will you say I love you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 03:42:38 PM AEST
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sad to hear beautiful words in this context.
You are a good woman, I hope he over comes his insecurities and tells you what you deserve to hear.

Re: When will you say I love you? (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 10:04:11 PM AEST
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suzy, I really like your poetic composure and the message it contained. Even though your special someone may have never verbalized his love for you which every girl loves to hear he has said it by giving you a family as that child I am certain was conceived through love. I agree with Ocean as the next time he starts to get a little warmed up and wants to get cozy lol. Prompt it out of him. Thank you for giving us a little of your and especially your talent of poetry. Wonderful poem.

Your Friend
Mickey Pig Knuckles

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