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Array ( [sid] => 131723 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Trolley Square [time] => 2007-02-14 00:12:11 [hometext] => I'm Feeling sad and empty for the people from my old home [bodytext] =>


A young man with his whole life ahead of him…
Felt his soul was empty and his future grim…

He took a drive in the wrong direction…
His torment slipped through everyone’s detection…

Everyone always says he seems so nice…
He never said a mean thing not even twice…

He came from a war torn land of bleak despair…
Some say this was the reason for his blank stare…

He was only 18 and has been here for some time…
Why would he crack over this at a drop of a dime…

"He was such a good boy. I don't know what happened,"
Was said after his gunshots, their ears deafened…

He took 5 lives and ruined much more…
Even before he walked through that door…

With his backpack of ammo and 2 guns…
And no remorse for the things that he’s done…

We cannot analyze the mind of evil…
Their orders don’t come from God but the Devil…

You cannot fix their internal design…
You’ll only hurt what’s yours and mine…

Put them away or put them down…
Send them to the hole or put them in the ground…

The innocent pays for our liberal ways…
And it is showing in these darkened days…

May peace find the way to YOUR faceless victims…



CLICK HERE---->Gunman Kills Five People at Trolley Square


· Alan "A.J." Walker 16 (serious condition)
· Jeffrey Walker 52 (killed)
· Kirsten Hinckley 15 (killed)
· Carolyn Tuft 44 (critical condition)
· Brad Frantz 24 (killed)
· Teresa Ellis 29 (killed)
· Vanessa Quinn 29 (killed)
· Shawn Munns 34 (serious Condition)
· Stacy Hansen 50 (serious condition)

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Trolley Square

Contributed by oneir8dude on Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 12:12:11 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished






A young man with his whole life ahead of him…
Felt his soul was empty and his future grim…

He took a drive in the wrong direction…
His torment slipped through everyone’s detection…

Everyone always says he seems so nice…
He never said a mean thing not even twice…

He came from a war torn land of bleak despair…
Some say this was the reason for his blank stare…

He was only 18 and has been here for some time…
Why would he crack over this at a drop of a dime…

"He was such a good boy. I don't know what happened,"
Was said after his gunshots, their ears deafened…

He took 5 lives and ruined much more…
Even before he walked through that door…

With his backpack of ammo and 2 guns…
And no remorse for the things that he’s done…

We cannot analyze the mind of evil…
Their orders don’t come from God but the Devil…

You cannot fix their internal design…
You’ll only hurt what’s yours and mine…

Put them away or put them down…
Send them to the hole or put them in the ground…

The innocent pays for our liberal ways…
And it is showing in these darkened days…

May peace find the way to YOUR faceless victims…



CLICK HERE---->Gunman Kills Five People at Trolley Square


· Alan "A.J." Walker 16 (serious condition)
· Jeffrey Walker 52 (killed)
· Kirsten Hinckley 15 (killed)
· Carolyn Tuft 44 (critical condition)
· Brad Frantz 24 (killed)
· Teresa Ellis 29 (killed)
· Vanessa Quinn 29 (killed)
· Shawn Munns 34 (serious Condition)
· Stacy Hansen 50 (serious condition)





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Re: Trolley Square (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 12:29:22 AM AEST
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Very sad but I'm not sure I know what this is about. Maybe u could pm me.
huggs,
emy


Re: Trolley Square (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 10:43:23 AM AEST
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holy crap...i can't believe you wrote about the shooting that just happened.....thats amazing...great job...crazy


Re: Trolley Square (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 11:35:25 PM AEST
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I am going to live 10 min from Trolley Square Bill.

What are you doing tomorrow? Maybe we can go to Fred's for coffee! I MEAN IT!!


Re: Trolley Square (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 12:02:22 AM AEST
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I think you did an excellent job with this. I saw it later on the news after I asked you what it was about.
It's really heart wrenching when these things happen.
Good job.
Big huggs, thanks,
emy


Re: Trolley Square (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 12:16:58 AM AEST
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Sad and powerful, condolences could barely touch.

Blessings




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