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Array ( [sid] => 131715 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Relapse Convention [time] => 2007-02-13 21:53:14 [hometext] => relapse is just your decision.i think that feedback would be really helpful... [bodytext] => Crazy crazy in my mind,
fealing pills on big declines
snort or swallow
feeling shallow
no one cares or sees the mellow
sight of "crazy" in my eyes
no one then saw through my lies
in the cup of liquid fly
many birds by snakes to cry.
Nonsense words filling my mind
let them go out of this earthly kind
of motion sickness implying well
the red flames framing the gates of hell.
Continous shakes sublime my hand
When I look I see the land
of what is gone but yet to come
cuz all advice just becomes dumb,
If you want to, go ahead,
relapse creeping in your head.
Enjoy the deed or say aloud
what leads you to this unholy ground.
Be aware of what's to come,
as both of these won't go by numb.
Both consequences bear along
so it's hard to choose which way to go.
Both directions wrong and right
either way you're still in the fight.
That never ending set of blows
that lay you down and hurt your nose.
So no advice here, what so ever
You must not say that is too clever
the one that good advice has issued
for he will never know your tissue.
When you lapse and it goes well,
you'll end up with me in hell.
If you hold out for a little while
it will occur only later in your file.
So live your life
and make good choices
we only get to live it once.
Do not listen to those outside voices,
the one inside you is the one that counts. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 66 [informant] => ediii [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

Relapse Convention

Contributed by ediii on Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 09:53:14 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Crazy crazy in my mind,
fealing pills on big declines
snort or swallow
feeling shallow
no one cares or sees the mellow
sight of "crazy" in my eyes
no one then saw through my lies
in the cup of liquid fly
many birds by snakes to cry.
Nonsense words filling my mind
let them go out of this earthly kind
of motion sickness implying well
the red flames framing the gates of hell.
Continous shakes sublime my hand
When I look I see the land
of what is gone but yet to come
cuz all advice just becomes dumb,
If you want to, go ahead,
relapse creeping in your head.
Enjoy the deed or say aloud
what leads you to this unholy ground.
Be aware of what's to come,
as both of these won't go by numb.
Both consequences bear along
so it's hard to choose which way to go.
Both directions wrong and right
either way you're still in the fight.
That never ending set of blows
that lay you down and hurt your nose.
So no advice here, what so ever
You must not say that is too clever
the one that good advice has issued
for he will never know your tissue.
When you lapse and it goes well,
you'll end up with me in hell.
If you hold out for a little while
it will occur only later in your file.
So live your life
and make good choices
we only get to live it once.
Do not listen to those outside voices,
the one inside you is the one that counts.

Copyright © ediii ... [ 2007-02-13 21:53:14]
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Re: Relapse Convention (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 01:14:24 AM AEST
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Very creative writing that captures the reader in the beginning.
Good work.
huggs,
emy

Re: Relapse Convention (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 09:07:48 AM AEST
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This is excellent. Only a journey made could uncover such intense wisdom of how to feel it. Thanks

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