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[aid] => mick
[title] => forever loving you still
[time] => 2007-02-12 03:04:32
[hometext] => I just wrote this about the girl I love so much, but she's with him, and the unhappiness and pain she is in, is killing me. This is an event that happend yesterday. please comment. thank you
[bodytext] => As I held you in my arms today,
I found myself not able, to break away.
The tears you shed, hurt me so,
I felt your pain, and just couldn't let go.
Wishing more, That I could do,
To dry your tears, and comfort you.
He made you cry, it's painfully cruel,
To treat you this way, he must be a fool.
Space you needed, he couldn't accept,
So now in my arms, You painfully wept.
I love you so much, wishing to be with you,
No more tears of pain, would you go through.
Like a queen, You deserve, to be loyaly treated,
While love and respect, Should be overly exceeded.
If only a better man, Was I at that time,
Then while holding you now, You would not be crying.
Not wanting you to go, But having to,
I walked you to your car, and say I still love you.
You softly said I love you too, with a painfull smile,
Missing those words, more then the length of the nile.
Fighting the tears, as you drove away,
Inside I went, And started to pray.
Lord, Please help me, with the right words to say,
Please help her, back into my arms to stay.
Give her the strength, to hang on,
Give me the strength, to stand strong.
This is all I ask from you,
The right thing, I know you'll do.
Please give me, the helping hand,
For this I'll return the favor, Amen.
by justin 2/12/07
[comments] => 7
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[informant] => jdawg
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[acomm] => 0
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[score] => 13
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => DreamsandWishes
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forever loving you still
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jdawg
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Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 03:04:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
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As I held you in my arms today,
I found myself not able, to break away.
The tears you shed, hurt me so,
I felt your pain, and just couldn't let go.
Wishing more, That I could do,
To dry your tears, and comfort you.
He made you cry, it's painfully cruel,
To treat you this way, he must be a fool.
Space you needed, he couldn't accept,
So now in my arms, You painfully wept.
I love you so much, wishing to be with you,
No more tears of pain, would you go through.
Like a queen, You deserve, to be loyaly treated,
While love and respect, Should be overly exceeded.
If only a better man, Was I at that time,
Then while holding you now, You would not be crying.
Not wanting you to go, But having to,
I walked you to your car, and say I still love you.
You softly said I love you too, with a painfull smile,
Missing those words, more then the length of the nile.
Fighting the tears, as you drove away,
Inside I went, And started to pray.
Lord, Please help me, with the right words to say,
Please help her, back into my arms to stay.
Give her the strength, to hang on,
Give me the strength, to stand strong.
This is all I ask from you,
The right thing, I know you'll do.
Please give me, the helping hand,
For this I'll return the favor, Amen.
by justin 2/12/07
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Re: forever loving you still
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by Nirvana12 on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 03:13:17 AM AEST
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Dude amazing poem, I really liked it and I am in the same damn situation, except the girl didnt come to me crying, but I understand what you are going through and it is much like hell, im sorry you have to go through it and I hope one day she will relize you are better than he is.
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Re: forever loving you still
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 05:41:47 AM AEST
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Beautiful words ... but GUYS GUYS GUYS.... If a woman is with ANOTHER ... why are you hanging around? It just doesn't happen they don't leave the man thats bad to them... and tho u cant see it they are being cruel and thoughtless to you .. Using you ... and because you love them so much you cant see it ... maybe they cant see it .... If you love them and have any self respect ... WALK AWAY .. they will have to become strong then and fend for themselves or LEAVE ..
but you would ONLY ever be 2nd best .... don't put yourself thru that. HARSH words I know .. but I see this happening again and again ... IF THE WOMEN/GIRLS loved you THEY WOULD BE WITH YOU!!!
I wish you all good luck and happiness for you truely deserve it being such loving caring people .... but please apply that to the woman that is waiting for you cos she is you just havent found her yet ...
Good luck
Dee xx |
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Re: forever loving you still
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by needledancing on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 06:05:46 AM AEST
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Sounds like you are in some real pain.
Hope that she realizes love is all their is in life and when you find it stay with it. Nothing else has any value. Beautifully expressed, I hope she reads it and returns to your heart full of love. |
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Re: forever loving you still
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 11:07:04 AM AEST
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this is a very powerful and emotional piece.. I must say though.. something is wrong if she is with someone and running to you .. that is something to think about there. I mean i think if she truly loved you she would be with you.. be careful.. very well expressed piece..
vampyress jenni |
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Re: forever loving you still
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by Oceandreamer on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 12:16:16 PM AEST
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| Lovely deep and touching write.I can feel your pain.Remember that what is meant to be will be. At the end of it all...The heart wants what the heart wants.It's not possible to fight or hide from love,cause love IS.What is yours will be yours...all in the right time.Stay strong and never stop believeing in what is. |
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Re: forever loving you still
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by Oceandreamer on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 12:29:55 PM AEST
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| I have to add that I agree with Phantom Vampyress's comment....and Ya,it's always wise to be carefull.Things often are not as they seem,but there is a reason for everything in life.If she did love you as much as you loved her,she would have been in your arms.You have to ask yourself...why isn't she?You can't stop your love for her,but you can numb those feelings to protect yourself.Try not to feed those feelings,for now...until time reveals all.Don't let it draw you in too much..her coming to you whilst she's with someone els.If she is meant for you,she will be yours...as for now,she's not.What will be WILL be,and the rest...was never yours or meant to be. |
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Re: forever loving you still
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 07:57:14 AM AEST
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Justin, I don't really know what brought me back to your beautiful but painful poem. In one way I am glad because I would never have read your reasoning.
I wish I could say now I agree with you. I wish I could say you are doing the correct thing, but life just isn't as simple and you are blinded by your love to see or understand anything us on the outside can see or advise.
I wish you good luck and happiness in whatever it is you decide to do and if you ever want to email or chat ... hey just do so ...
Good luck to you both
Dee xx |
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