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Array ( [sid] => 131637 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rough Hands [time] => 2007-02-11 13:54:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Memories carry,
and the years they claimed.
promise myself, remember.

She`s not you,
but carries the Spring,
stick`im notes when I forget.

In burnt fields
we move forward,
grace touches rough hands.

She is not years, but willing"
a heart to me,
that means every moment,
a gift I receive, at no occasion,
a breath.

This is for you,
that spring rain, waiting somewhere,
a note sent in the wind,
a written maybe,
placed in a heart...waiting. Vincent [comments] => 6 [counter] => 278 [topic] => 21 [informant] => crow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Rough Hands

Contributed by crow on Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 01:54:47 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Memories carry,
and the years they claimed.
promise myself, remember.

She`s not you,
but carries the Spring,
stick`im notes when I forget.

In burnt fields
we move forward,
grace touches rough hands.

She is not years, but willing"
a heart to me,
that means every moment,
a gift I receive, at no occasion,
a breath.

This is for you,
that spring rain, waiting somewhere,
a note sent in the wind,
a written maybe,
placed in a heart...waiting. Vincent

Copyright © crow ... [ 2007-02-11 13:54:47]
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Re: Rough Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 02:28:28 PM AEST
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This is beautiful hun. Serene and tender reaches out of this. I loved the spring rain, waiting somewhere....... a note sent in the wind, bravo!

hugs
~Michelle~

Re: Rough Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 07:58:28 PM AEST
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OH my .. that last stanza is completely captivating !

Such tender words .. and so gracefully set down ..

beautiful, Vincent

~Breezy

Re: Rough Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 02:59:26 AM AEST
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Vincent~ my this is so beautiful my friend.
The spring rain, waiting somewhere, a note sent in the wind. A captivating, tender and very well written piece of poetry. Your work is a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing your wonderful poetry with us~
*warm poetic hugs n smiles*
sue m

Re: Rough Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 10:44:10 AM AEST
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wow this is a very exquisite piece of work and its beatifully worded.. I especially like the end

vampyress Jenni

Re: Rough Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 11:41:54 PM AEST
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A song of synchronizing between love & hope, worlds come and gone. There is a melancholy that holds the 'note' in place and a joy in waiting.

Bravo

Peace
Yang

Re: Rough Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 07:30:55 AM AEST
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this is so beautiful.. i really love this sooo much, its like a breath blown softly....

love n' hugs nessa

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