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The Guy I’ve watched for
What feels like centuries

He combs his fingers through
My hair with a gentle touch

He takes my hand into his
Our fingers interlace

We turn to one another
Stare deeply into each other’s
Eyes

Suddenly I am taken by
Something and pushed forward

My lips land on his

His soft lips upon mine
A moment I wish would
Last forever

Then I snap to reality
My best friend shaking her
Head and smiling with amusement

She chuckles says I’m never in my right mind I laugh at this joke for it is probable true

I had been watching him from afar
Again…

We move forward in the line

While I look over my shoulder
To see his gaze upon me from afar

His friend scolding him for staring at me because he has a girlfriend
His words aren’t to hurtful
“ You have a girlfriend but your eyes are always on that chic”
Wes shrugs and walks on

We hold eye contact for a split second’s time we smile and blush at one another

I can’t help but wonder at the time what was going through his mind

I wonder if he wonders the same thing for me


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My fairytale kiss

Contributed by Jen_unknown_to_myself on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 08:29:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



He is here next to me
The Guy I’ve watched for
What feels like centuries

He combs his fingers through
My hair with a gentle touch

He takes my hand into his
Our fingers interlace

We turn to one another
Stare deeply into each other’s
Eyes

Suddenly I am taken by
Something and pushed forward

My lips land on his

His soft lips upon mine
A moment I wish would
Last forever

Then I snap to reality
My best friend shaking her
Head and smiling with amusement

She chuckles says I’m never in my right mind I laugh at this joke for it is probable true

I had been watching him from afar
Again…

We move forward in the line

While I look over my shoulder
To see his gaze upon me from afar

His friend scolding him for staring at me because he has a girlfriend
His words aren’t to hurtful
“ You have a girlfriend but your eyes are always on that chic”
Wes shrugs and walks on

We hold eye contact for a split second’s time we smile and blush at one another

I can’t help but wonder at the time what was going through his mind

I wonder if he wonders the same thing for me






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Re: My fairytale kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by feralpen on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 08:51:56 PM AEST
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Dear Jen;

Wonderful poem full of hope... and I think promise.

Best wishes to you and Wes.


Re: My fairytale kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by trialnerror on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 11:19:53 PM AEST
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very down to earth and innocent , and definitely full of hope. i like it


Re: My fairytale kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 10:51:01 AM AEST
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Jen_unknown_to_myself, I enjoyed the message of this wonderful poem as I have to agree with the other commentors and say its packed full of hope. Thank you so much for composing and giving us all such a fine poem to read and for giving us just a little of your creative personality.

Mickey Pig Knuckles
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