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Array ( [sid] => 131565 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => no title yet...sorry [time] => 2007-02-09 08:33:17 [hometext] => this is my compotition poem that i am entering tell me what you all think [bodytext] => tears run down the girls face
her hand shakes as she grabs the blade]
cut 1 cut 2 cut 3
3 cuts for 3 mistakes
hide behind the pretty face
without reason or cause
she draws her strength
from her lost memories
of times once had
on the floor she is numb
theropy once a week
for all the time
she made herself bleed
group sessions of reasons why
months go by and then....
she trys to kill herself
addmitted to a mental hospital
a battle waging inside
to live or to die
a week of her life changed forever
by a few nice people
living with regrets
of lost time
all the time when i worried
i left the outside
to hide within
theorpy and counseling
medicine and doctors
a new day each with it's own stuggles
striving to find a healthier way to live
to deal with stress an alternative to cutting
suicide lost in yesterday's memory
living, breathing, thinking to a healthier way of living [comments] => 4 [counter] => 255 [topic] => 43 [informant] => crazy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
no title yet...sorry

Contributed by crazy on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 08:33:17 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



tears run down the girls face
her hand shakes as she grabs the blade]
cut 1 cut 2 cut 3
3 cuts for 3 mistakes
hide behind the pretty face
without reason or cause
she draws her strength
from her lost memories
of times once had
on the floor she is numb
theropy once a week
for all the time
she made herself bleed
group sessions of reasons why
months go by and then....
she trys to kill herself
addmitted to a mental hospital
a battle waging inside
to live or to die
a week of her life changed forever
by a few nice people
living with regrets
of lost time
all the time when i worried
i left the outside
to hide within
theorpy and counseling
medicine and doctors
a new day each with it's own stuggles
striving to find a healthier way to live
to deal with stress an alternative to cutting
suicide lost in yesterday's memory
living, breathing, thinking to a healthier way of living




Copyright © crazy ... [ 2007-02-09 08:33:17]
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Re: no title yet...sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Channing on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 09:46:32 AM AEST
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Sounds very melancholy at first, but then develops into an optimistic message. Gret write!

-Channing-


Re: no title yet...sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 01:44:32 PM AEST
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very well written out.. i like this piece alot.. it starts off sad and then gives hope at the end.. very well done

vampyress Jenni


Re: no title yet...sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Saloni on Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 05:55:38 PM AEST
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billiant poem!


Re: no title yet...sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 10:50:28 PM AEST
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i agree with jenni i like this poem.




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