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Array ( [sid] => 131559 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ain't No Telling [time] => 2007-02-09 02:46:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => In a daze
I often blaze
to a unknown place
where there is no trace
of sorrow,
I think of things
that mean nothing
I let out silent screams
and imagine movies
where I am thee hero.

I laugh about
the things I doubt
as sensations spin me "round,
oh so sweetly
melting and flowing
I slowly go down.

All the firewalls are broken
my modem is smoking
I laugh I giggle
cause there is no need
for sorrow,
InnerVisons are flowing
I transform
oh I'm exploding
you better get me now
ain't no telling
where I will be tomorrow. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 43 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Ain't No Telling

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 02:46:05 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

In a daze
I often blaze
to a unknown place
where there is no trace
of sorrow,
I think of things
that mean nothing
I let out silent screams
and imagine movies
where I am thee hero.

I laugh about
the things I doubt
as sensations spin me "round,
oh so sweetly
melting and flowing
I slowly go down.

All the firewalls are broken
my modem is smoking
I laugh I giggle
cause there is no need
for sorrow,
InnerVisons are flowing
I transform
oh I'm exploding
you better get me now
ain't no telling
where I will be tomorrow.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2007-02-09 02:46:05]
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Re: Ain't No Telling (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_chadow on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 07:33:52 AM AEST
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good and fun and random. I miss poems like these. Keep it up, mate.

Re: Ain't No Telling (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 01:09:23 PM AEST
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"Oh I'm exploding you better get me now, ain't no telling where I will be tomorrow". Awesome words. They ring out so true in me. Excellent write.

Re: Ain't No Telling (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 12:19:17 AM AEST
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unknown_utopia, Now this is very creative writing in excellent poetic form. I really enjoyed your style and now must thank you for sharing a little of your creative personality with us all and for giving us such a wonderful poem to savor. I will be waiting for you to reach for and pick up your poetic pen, so once again I can feel myself bearing a warm grin. Thank You.

Mickey Pig Knuckles

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Re: Ain't No Telling (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 06:06:35 AM AEST
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I certainly heard that.
Great work.
Big huggs,
emy

Re: Ain't No Telling (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 28th July 2020 @ 03:12:29 AM AEST
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Off the cuff........ the real deal.

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