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[sid] => 131557
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Dying By The Phone
[time] => 2007-02-09 01:18:25
[hometext] => just a poem wrote during a sad time but my first submission in months so help me out and critique this let me know how you all feel
[bodytext] => Tonight I sit and cry alone After waiting here by the phone IF I don't hear her voice tonight All the wrong things won't be made right As another tear falls to the floor My watchful eye stares at the door Pain stings and lonelyness kills My hand it shakes but holds my pills My knees tremble, my heart is weary Trough glazed eyes I can't see clearly Our love has faded out of sight I will not see it's face tonight I can not see tommorow's hope While hanging here from this rope I'll die in this house hanging alone After waiting here by the phone [comments] => 2 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 13 [informant] => outlaw_mutiny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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