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Array ( [sid] => 131557 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dying By The Phone [time] => 2007-02-09 01:18:25 [hometext] => just a poem wrote during a sad time but my first submission in months so help me out and critique this let me know how you all feel [bodytext] => Tonight I sit and cry alone
After waiting here by the phone

IF I don't hear her voice tonight
All the wrong things won't be made right

As another tear falls to the floor
My watchful eye stares at the door

Pain stings and lonelyness kills
My hand it shakes but holds my pills

My knees tremble, my heart is weary
Trough glazed eyes I can't see clearly

Our love has faded out of sight
I will not see it's face tonight

I can not see tommorow's hope
While hanging here from this rope

I'll die in this house hanging alone
After waiting here by the phone [comments] => 2 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 13 [informant] => outlaw_mutiny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Dying By The Phone

Contributed by outlaw_mutiny on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 01:18:25 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Tonight I sit and cry alone
After waiting here by the phone

IF I don't hear her voice tonight
All the wrong things won't be made right

As another tear falls to the floor
My watchful eye stares at the door

Pain stings and lonelyness kills
My hand it shakes but holds my pills

My knees tremble, my heart is weary
Trough glazed eyes I can't see clearly

Our love has faded out of sight
I will not see it's face tonight

I can not see tommorow's hope
While hanging here from this rope

I'll die in this house hanging alone
After waiting here by the phone




Copyright © outlaw_mutiny ... [ 2007-02-09 01:18:25]
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Re: Dying By The Phone (User Rating: 1 )
by soulsearching43 on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 05:01:56 AM AEST
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your emotions in this piece are nicely expressed weve all been there

thanks for sharing

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Re: Dying By The Phone (User Rating: 1 )
by raging_bull13 on Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 07:12:28 AM AEST
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wow, all i can say is wow




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