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Array ( [sid] => 131546 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Good Fight. [time] => 2007-02-08 17:55:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I carry myself
Like an army for the broken hearted
Shedding tears for my love departed
Raging for loves eternal glory
Telling my own sad story
Continuing to fight
With all that I am
For whats right
A better tomorrow
Nothing can stop me
As I march down this
Lonely beaten path of sorrow
I can still hear her voice
Echo in my head
And you can paint my face red
With all the love I've bled
But nothing can stop me now
I will make it to her somehow
Theres nothing I won't do
No matter what I have to go through
I won't decieve
Take a bullet for what I believe
Pass the test
Make it through this quest
Just to rest
Beside the girl
Who owns the heart inside my chest. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 309 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Bleedthelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The Good Fight.

Contributed by Bleedthelove on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 05:55:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I carry myself
Like an army for the broken hearted
Shedding tears for my love departed
Raging for loves eternal glory
Telling my own sad story
Continuing to fight
With all that I am
For whats right
A better tomorrow
Nothing can stop me
As I march down this
Lonely beaten path of sorrow
I can still hear her voice
Echo in my head
And you can paint my face red
With all the love I've bled
But nothing can stop me now
I will make it to her somehow
Theres nothing I won't do
No matter what I have to go through
I won't decieve
Take a bullet for what I believe
Pass the test
Make it through this quest
Just to rest
Beside the girl
Who owns the heart inside my chest.

Copyright © Bleedthelove ... [ 2007-02-08 17:55:30]
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Re: The Good Fight. (User Rating: 1 )
by ellimac on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 08:27:55 PM AEST
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i like thi poem. the emotion. the fight. i can relate. love it

Re: The Good Fight. (User Rating: 1 )
by SaintzAndSinnerz on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 08:36:19 PM AEST
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Your one of a kind bleedthelove. always bringing such beautiful words to life. i said it before and i'll say it again, shes a very lucky girl. beautiful write.

Re: The Good Fight. (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 11:55:31 PM AEST
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bittersweet
great write

Re: The Good Fight. (User Rating: 1 )
by brave_celt on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 01:05:58 AM AEST
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i agree with everyone else this is a great message, but would be lying if i did not mention that the rhyme scheme is off but not in too bad a way just work on form good write

Re: The Good Fight. (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 09:17:04 AM AEST
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wonderful poem, please keep penning.
MPK

Re: The Good Fight. (User Rating: 1 )
by BornReckless on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 09:44:39 AM AEST
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I also agree, the message of this poem is simply beautiful and you bring a strength and a love to your writing thats amazing. You put your heart on paper and I take my hat off to you for not only being able to do that, but also sharing it with us. Thank you bleedthelove.

Re: The Good Fight. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 11:00:19 AM AEST
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wow such sadness in this piece.. very well penned out.. i love the ending and the flow.. enchanting write..
vampyress jenni

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