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Its actually historic
Looking back on the times, from the golden ages to each ones individual downfall
And was said by "Shel Silverstein" that it was almost perfect but not quite
She had something going
For you can actually grasp each ones situation
In the fact that were all different, it seems most want one thing
To be loved and to be loved back, Is something that most would hope for
And although relationships reflect each ones personality
Its best to be judged when no ones watching, than a stadium with all eyes on you.
To be completely honest I would give back every moment of regret
As most would say they do

But the overwhelming majority have a guilty pleasure, in each personal crime they commit.
Those who'd give back show the real change, and considering those who live routine are the ones that happen to fall into this category
They are more than happy that everydays the same.

So I guess human activity in social situations lack more than every other
When someone else can exceed you in everything your good at.

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seconds

Contributed by glue on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 03:21:55 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

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Its actually historic
Looking back on the times, from the golden ages to each ones individual downfall
And was said by "Shel Silverstein" that it was almost perfect but not quite
She had something going
For you can actually grasp each ones situation
In the fact that were all different, it seems most want one thing
To be loved and to be loved back, Is something that most would hope for
And although relationships reflect each ones personality
Its best to be judged when no ones watching, than a stadium with all eyes on you.
To be completely honest I would give back every moment of regret
As most would say they do

But the overwhelming majority have a guilty pleasure, in each personal crime they commit.
Those who'd give back show the real change, and considering those who live routine are the ones that happen to fall into this category
They are more than happy that everydays the same.

So I guess human activity in social situations lack more than every other
When someone else can exceed you in everything your good at.

Copyright © glue ... [ 2007-02-08 15:21:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: seconds (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 12:12:03 AM AEST
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the end is confusing
almost like you stopped short

not in your ending

but in what your trying to say

like you became self conscious and
second guessed yourself

and the beginning
had you left off -it's actually historic-
it would've been stronger.

in any case, i don't post if i don't like
and that's compliment enough to me
but for you:

I liked it.

Re: seconds (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 09:13:04 AM AEST
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Nice poem, very good job
MPK

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