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And with this kiss, I will hold you til the end of time
And this embrace I've called my home, will be my protector
When it's been said and done
The truth remains, this heart can't fall
And we can't let this fade away
This smile you've shown, opened up my heart
We'll watch the moon explode, and see the sun as it fades away
The truth remains, this heart can't fall
And we can't let this fade away
Love
When this has been said and done
The truth will remain, and your heart will forever captivate me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 2 [informant] => lieinruin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

A Rose Among Razors

Contributed by lieinruin on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 03:14:45 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

this is actually a song i wrote, and serve as my lyrics for the band i'm currently in

And with this kiss, I will hold you til the end of time
And this embrace I've called my home, will be my protector
When it's been said and done
The truth remains, this heart can't fall
And we can't let this fade away
This smile you've shown, opened up my heart
We'll watch the moon explode, and see the sun as it fades away
The truth remains, this heart can't fall
And we can't let this fade away
Love
When this has been said and done
The truth will remain, and your heart will forever captivate me

Copyright © lieinruin ... [ 2007-02-08 03:14:45]
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Re: A Rose Among Razors (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 07:40:01 AM AEST
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lieinruin, This is awesome and very well composed. Good job on this one. Thanks for sharing.

Mickey Pig Knuckles

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Re: A Rose Among Razors (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 05:45:22 PM AEST
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Excellent poem. Nicely written.

Re: A Rose Among Razors (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 12:12:15 PM AEST
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This is very sweet, I particularly liked the images in "We'll watch the moon explode, and see the sun as it fades away".

Dom

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