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[aid] => mick
[title] => waiting
[time] => 2007-02-07 21:46:12
[hometext] => just thought this up .. enjoy everyone
[bodytext] => Where there is an end
that is where I seem to begin
will this be the end of the line?
or will everything rewind to repeat the cycle again?
holding on
staying strong
not giving in to the haunting fears
trying to make it through the rips and tears
standing still while all move ahead
in the distance I am.. further behind
when's my time?
Everyone is Gone
I am still standing here...
....waiting....
waiting....
to get somewhere
vampyress jenni
[comments] => 12
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[score] => 30
[ratings] => 6
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Lifepoems
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waiting
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 09:46:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Where there is an end
that is where I seem to begin
will this be the end of the line?
or will everything rewind to repeat the cycle again?
holding on
staying strong
not giving in to the haunting fears
trying to make it through the rips and tears
standing still while all move ahead
in the distance I am.. further behind
when's my time?
Everyone is Gone
I am still standing here...
....waiting....
waiting....
to get somewhere
vampyress jenni
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Re: waiting
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 10:39:48 PM AEST
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Polish this pearl it will have a bright luster and great meaning for you as the shine comes up taking you into other worlds arriving in style.
Peace
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Re: waiting
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 11:47:02 PM AEST
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Phantomvampyress, I hope you know how you have made my day, two great poems of yours have come my way. Another great write by such a talented author as this seems to almost be a fact of life as I have been waiting! waiting! for many years to get somewhere. I only thought water became stagnate lol. Each time you reach for and write with your poetic pen, this reading fan gets excited and displays a big warm grin.
Thanks for being you and my friend :)
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: waiting
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 02:14:49 AM AEST
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| GREAT WRITE |
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Re: waiting
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by strawberryshortcake on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 01:11:26 PM AEST
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| way to go!! this is super. |
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Re: waiting
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 05:44:39 PM AEST
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Hey Jen~ Another top notch write by you my dear friend. The contents of your pages are impressive as always. Keep penning down your emotions for you do this so well. Rock on JenStar~
love n hugs,
dreamer |
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Re: waiting
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by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 05:48:52 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem. Very nicely written. |
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Re: waiting
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 07:46:55 PM AEST
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Very interesting thoughts this poem bring's out. reminds me of the chinese proverb, " a journy of thousand miles begins with one foot step." Nicely done.
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Re: waiting
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 08:13:40 PM AEST
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excellent piece
' sure you will achieve what you seek |
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Re: waiting
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by Linds on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 03:22:16 PM AEST
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| I like this a lot..you have such talent. |
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Re: waiting
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 08:59:32 AM AEST
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Jenni, has anyone ever told you that you do an amazing job writing how you feel?.. I think that you are very talented and that this poem was beautifully written..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: waiting
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by Loriann on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 03:40:18 PM AEST
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I really liked this .. It was very different. Good job.
Loriann |
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Re: waiting
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 03:39:50 PM AEST
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lovely expression of feeling which captures time...
love n' hugs nessa |
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