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Array ( [sid] => 131511 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please don't go [time] => 2007-02-07 21:07:02 [hometext] => another poem about my love life..lol. please read and comment. thank you [bodytext] => You say i should move on, but it's not that easy to do,
Especially when, everything, reminds me of you.
In order to move on, I must want to first,
But without you, out of my chest, my heart will burst.
The love we shared, can't be defined,
And my heart is yours, untill the end of time.
A choice you've made, So you can't hurt me no more,
But a chance with you, I will take, Even if it leaves me sore.
And who's to say, We are not meant to be,
How will we know, If we give up so easily.
A better man, I've become, ever since I met you,
And a better man, I will stay, just give me the chance to prove.
If the love we shared, was truelly real, then let's make it be,
Becuase in my heart, a love that true, can make it through anything.
You said that you love me, But for you I shouldn't wait,
So I guess if there's any hope, for an "US", It will be up to fate.
The only thing, I'm gonna ask, Is for you to "really" think this through,
I want you , to look me in the eyes, and tell me its what you truelly wanna do.
If we are something, meant to be, And we just push away what has grown,
Then happiness, we both could have, We would never know.
So before I end this poem, I just want you to know,
Through thick or thin, rain or shine, I will ALWAY'S love you so!!
by justin 2/7/07 [comments] => 2 [counter] => 271 [topic] => 22 [informant] => jdawg [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Please don't go

Contributed by jdawg on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 09:07:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You say i should move on, but it's not that easy to do,
Especially when, everything, reminds me of you.
In order to move on, I must want to first,
But without you, out of my chest, my heart will burst.
The love we shared, can't be defined,
And my heart is yours, untill the end of time.
A choice you've made, So you can't hurt me no more,
But a chance with you, I will take, Even if it leaves me sore.
And who's to say, We are not meant to be,
How will we know, If we give up so easily.
A better man, I've become, ever since I met you,
And a better man, I will stay, just give me the chance to prove.
If the love we shared, was truelly real, then let's make it be,
Becuase in my heart, a love that true, can make it through anything.
You said that you love me, But for you I shouldn't wait,
So I guess if there's any hope, for an "US", It will be up to fate.
The only thing, I'm gonna ask, Is for you to "really" think this through,
I want you , to look me in the eyes, and tell me its what you truelly wanna do.
If we are something, meant to be, And we just push away what has grown,
Then happiness, we both could have, We would never know.
So before I end this poem, I just want you to know,
Through thick or thin, rain or shine, I will ALWAY'S love you so!!
by justin 2/7/07




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Re: Please don't go (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 09:18:30 PM AEST
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jdawg, I am impressed with your words of art and I hope you have read it to her or she takes the time to read it as this was beautifully composed. Hey, thanks for sharing.

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Re: Please don't go (User Rating: 1 )
by seafire on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 09:20:07 PM AEST
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this poem was so beautiful how lucky she is to have you still love her. i hope you find someone so worth your love
beautiful written
mare




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