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Array ( [sid] => 131456 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => First Steps [time] => 2007-02-06 17:20:04 [hometext] => First steps always feel like the biggest steps. [bodytext] => Life's always moving
just as the sea,
and every moment
changes somee part of me.

A constant game
of change, it seems.
A product of hope.
A collection of dreams.

The idea of first steps
makes us all want to hide,
but as soon as we take them
we're brimming with pride.

It's our choice of first steps
that makes us who we are.
The number of how many
determines if we get far.

We'll all take more steps
as life keeps pushing on.
So, remember the first one's
because soon they'll be gone. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 19 [informant] => xXx_lil_pyro_xXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

First Steps

Contributed by xXx_lil_pyro_xXx on Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 05:20:04 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Life's always moving
just as the sea,
and every moment
changes somee part of me.

A constant game
of change, it seems.
A product of hope.
A collection of dreams.

The idea of first steps
makes us all want to hide,
but as soon as we take them
we're brimming with pride.

It's our choice of first steps
that makes us who we are.
The number of how many
determines if we get far.

We'll all take more steps
as life keeps pushing on.
So, remember the first one's
because soon they'll be gone.

Copyright © xXx_lil_pyro_xXx ... [ 2007-02-06 17:20:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: First Steps (User Rating: 1 )
by soulsearching43 on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 05:36:10 AM AEST
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great write
the first steps are what set the tone for the rest of the journey

Re: First Steps (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Tuesday, 30th October 2007 @ 09:39:00 AM AEST
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The first steps are usually the most nervous and tentative in anything we choose to do.
Only by taking those steps do we know what we can or can't achieve

Steve

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