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Array ( [sid] => 131425 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Self-destructive-- [time] => 2007-02-05 23:51:51 [hometext] => A little dark i suppose, and rather hostile, but it all means something so if there's something not clear, i'd love to elucidate it for you. please comment, and i'll always return the favor. [bodytext] => Sympathize
***** all the lies,
I like those rivers on your wrists
Shells of bodies,
Hearts in pieces
Broken glass and bloody fists

You say you died
My help’s not needed,
But yet you hide the blade,
Until,
The distant whisper in your head,
Now screams,
And is telling you to kill

Cobra’s fatal bite
Preferred to a lover’s venomous kiss
Stained with tears and blood are lips,
From all the lies so sweetly said,
Let’s all jump into the abyss
As if we’re not already dead

Forgive us Father, for we have sinned,
We’ve wished death on this whole town,
Consumed in sin,
It crawls our skin,
Ashes, ashes, we all fall down.

*August*
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 56 [informant] => drtylilsecret [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => sarcasticpoetry )

Self-destructive--

Contributed by drtylilsecret on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 11:51:51 PM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry

Sympathize
***** all the lies,
I like those rivers on your wrists
Shells of bodies,
Hearts in pieces
Broken glass and bloody fists

You say you died
My help’s not needed,
But yet you hide the blade,
Until,
The distant whisper in your head,
Now screams,
And is telling you to kill

Cobra’s fatal bite
Preferred to a lover’s venomous kiss
Stained with tears and blood are lips,
From all the lies so sweetly said,
Let’s all jump into the abyss
As if we’re not already dead

Forgive us Father, for we have sinned,
We’ve wished death on this whole town,
Consumed in sin,
It crawls our skin,
Ashes, ashes, we all fall down.

*August*

Copyright Â© drtylilsecret ... [ 2007-02-05 23:51:51]
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Re: Self-destructive-- (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 11:22:34 AM AEST
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drtylilsecret, now this is a very creative piece of reality for many in todays society and the message contained actually has quite a history throughout time. Thank you for sharing a bit of your creative personality and your wonderful talent with all of us. Good job.
Mickey Pig Knuckles

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