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Array ( [sid] => 131416 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => TILL DEATH [time] => 2007-02-05 18:50:27 [hometext] => I DEDICATE THIS POEM TO MY GRANDPARENTS MY GRANDMOTHER TOOK CARE OF MY GRANDFATHER FOR 3 YEARS TILL HIS DEATH ON 1/31/07 [bodytext] => HOW DO YOU WATCH THE MAN YOU LOVE DIE
WHEN ALL YOU CAN DO IS WONDER WHY

I TRY THINKING BACK ON BETTER DAYS
BEFORE DEATH SHOWED ITS EVIL WAYS

BUT WATCHING THIS MAN WRITHE IN PAIN
I THINK I JUST MAY GO INSANE

HE WAS SO GOOD HE WAS SO KIND
A BETTER MAN YOU COULD NOT FIND

AS MUCH AS I WANT HIM HERE TO STAY
I CANT WATCH HIS SUFFERING ONE MORE DAY

SO I TELL HIM ITS OK TO GIVE IN TO DEATHS CALL
AND THATS WHEN I BEGIN MY FALL

DEPRESSION SETS IN AND CARRIES ME AWAY
I JUST DONT HAVE THE STRENGTH TO STAY

SO NOW I PRAY FOR GOD TO PLEASE END MY LIFE
BECAUSE I NEED MY HUSBAND
AND HE NEEDS HIS WIFE [comments] => 1 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 75 [informant] => soulsearching43 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

TILL DEATH

Contributed by soulsearching43 on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 06:50:27 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

HOW DO YOU WATCH THE MAN YOU LOVE DIE
WHEN ALL YOU CAN DO IS WONDER WHY

I TRY THINKING BACK ON BETTER DAYS
BEFORE DEATH SHOWED ITS EVIL WAYS

BUT WATCHING THIS MAN WRITHE IN PAIN
I THINK I JUST MAY GO INSANE

HE WAS SO GOOD HE WAS SO KIND
A BETTER MAN YOU COULD NOT FIND

AS MUCH AS I WANT HIM HERE TO STAY
I CANT WATCH HIS SUFFERING ONE MORE DAY

SO I TELL HIM ITS OK TO GIVE IN TO DEATHS CALL
AND THATS WHEN I BEGIN MY FALL

DEPRESSION SETS IN AND CARRIES ME AWAY
I JUST DONT HAVE THE STRENGTH TO STAY

SO NOW I PRAY FOR GOD TO PLEASE END MY LIFE
BECAUSE I NEED MY HUSBAND
AND HE NEEDS HIS WIFE

Copyright © soulsearching43 ... [ 2007-02-05 18:50:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: TILL DEATH (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 06:53:36 PM AEST
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it is a beautiful tribute to some we love the most.
As a widower I very well understand how it is to helplessly see some one we love die in pain...
Good write...
FRANCO

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