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Array ( [sid] => 131397 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => waiting once again... 2007-02-05 09:41:18 [hometext] => i wrote this last night when my boyfriend had to go back to ohio. [bodytext] => this cant be real
it must be a dream
this cant be my reality
i cant hear myself scream

once again you have
found yourself waiting
the lights all go down
now the music is fading

your so self abused
cant help but feel used
every time you think of it
you just get more confused

you wait for his return
and at long last your together
then again he must leave
now its tears you must weather

why must we carry on this way
my heart will break for you today
as it always does just everyday
that you have to be so far away

all my life there have been lies
sacrifice and compromise
and i had to admit i was surprised
when i saw only truth and love in his eyes

its scary how strong
a feeling can be
i try not to cry
when your so close to me

i still feel so lost
i just need you to stay
i dont want you to leave
how can you leave me this way?

here i am once again
still i am waiting
as the tears roll down
and my heart best is fading [comments] => 3 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 48 [informant] => random_kisses_xoxo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

waiting once again...<3

Contributed by random_kisses_xoxo on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 09:41:18 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

this cant be real
it must be a dream
this cant be my reality
i cant hear myself scream

once again you have
found yourself waiting
the lights all go down
now the music is fading

your so self abused
cant help but feel used
every time you think of it
you just get more confused

you wait for his return
and at long last your together
then again he must leave
now its tears you must weather

why must we carry on this way
my heart will break for you today
as it always does just everyday
that you have to be so far away

all my life there have been lies
sacrifice and compromise
and i had to admit i was surprised
when i saw only truth and love in his eyes

its scary how strong
a feeling can be
i try not to cry
when your so close to me

i still feel so lost
i just need you to stay
i dont want you to leave
how can you leave me this way?

here i am once again
still i am waiting
as the tears roll down
and my heart best is fading

Copyright © random_kisses_xoxo ... [ 2007-02-05 09:41:18]
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Re: waiting once again...<3 (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 09:45:18 AM AEST
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a very powerful write.. you can feel the yearning in this piece of misisng someone or having a strong feeling for them.. why don't you move with your bf or vice versa.. very well expressed!!

vampyress jenni

Re: waiting once again...<3 (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 01:46:08 PM AEST
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very heart felt
beautiful
because you are waiting
i known alone sucks
but you have some one coming back
hold your head up
and think of the tears as joyous
'cuz you know he's coming back to you.
you're beautiful, you'll be fine

blesses

Re: waiting once again...<3 (User Rating: 1 )
by bluestars on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 03:17:06 PM AEST
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A very heart felt poem
i know its hard to live day by day
and not having him there but
if its meant to be you two will always
have one another, im sure he
also feels miserable not having you
with him everyday. Cheer up darling
in the end you'll have each other:)
Keep on writing
Best wishes
~Eve~

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