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Array ( [sid] => 131360 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => THE FIRST WIFE [time] => 2007-02-04 10:55:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => RIGHT FROM THE BEGINNING I THINK I KNEW
THIS LOVE WAS TO GOOD TO BE TRUE

I WAS SO YOUNG AND FULL OF LIFE
THEN YOU MADE ME YOUR FIRST WIFE

THE TORMENT STARTED RIGHT AWAY
I SHOULD HAVE LEFT THE VERY FIRST DAY

THE BEATINGS FOLLOWED THE PAIN WAS REAL
THIS WASNT SUPPOSED TO BE PART OF THE DEAL

I THOUGHT YOU WOULD CHANGE IF ONLY YOU COULD SEE
THAT NO ONE LOVED YOU MORE THAN ME

NOW IM OLD AND BEATEN DOWN
MY SMILES TURNED TO A PERMANENT FROWN

I STAYED TO LONG THIS I KNOW
NOW ITS TIME FOR ME TO GO

BUT BEFORE I LEAVE I HOPE YOULL SEE
THAT BEING SO ANGRY IS NO WAY TO BE

I THINK I FINALLY UNDERSTAND
ITS TIME FOR ME TO TAKE A STAND

NOW I KNOW I DESERVE A HAPPY LIFE
SOMETHING I'LL NEVER HAVE IF I STAY YOUR WIFE

SO I'LL MOVE ON AND TRY TO HEAL
ITS TIME FOR ME TO TAKE THE WHEEL

BUT DONT WORRY I'LL SURVIVE
FOR LIFES JUST ONE BIG TEST DRIVE

I KNOW THAT GOD WILL SEE ME THROUGH
'HE KNOWS I'VE SEEN HELL' I WAS MARRIED TO YOU

SO I WRITE THIS NOW FOR WIFE NUMBER TWO
BECAUSE NO ONE DESERVES TO BE BLACK AND BLUE

DON'T BELIEVE HIS CHARM OR HIS LIES
LEAVE HIM BEFORE YOUR SPIRIT DIES

IF YOU DONT YOU'LL SOON FIND
HE'S NOT THE MAN YOU THOUGHT WAS KIND

SOON HE'LL HAVE YOU BEGGING HIM TO STAY
I KNOW IT SOUNDS CRAZY BUT THATS HIS WAY

HE SOMEHOW GETS DEEP IN YOUR HEAD
AND MAKES YOU WISH THAT YOU WERE DEAD

THEN HE 'LL HAVE YOU BELIEVING IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT
AND BEFORE YOU KNOW IT LIFE'S ONE BIG ASSAULT

AND JUST WHEN YOU REALIZE THAT YOU WANT TO LEAVE
HE'LL TELL YOU HE LOVES YOU AND YOU WILL BELIEVE .

SO PLEASE HEED MY WARNING AND GET ON WITH YOUR LIFE
YOU DONT WANT TO END UP LIKE HIS FIRST WIFE [comments] => 3 [counter] => 258 [topic] => 32 [informant] => soulsearching43 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

THE FIRST WIFE

Contributed by soulsearching43 on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 10:55:35 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

RIGHT FROM THE BEGINNING I THINK I KNEW
THIS LOVE WAS TO GOOD TO BE TRUE

I WAS SO YOUNG AND FULL OF LIFE
THEN YOU MADE ME YOUR FIRST WIFE

THE TORMENT STARTED RIGHT AWAY
I SHOULD HAVE LEFT THE VERY FIRST DAY

THE BEATINGS FOLLOWED THE PAIN WAS REAL
THIS WASNT SUPPOSED TO BE PART OF THE DEAL

I THOUGHT YOU WOULD CHANGE IF ONLY YOU COULD SEE
THAT NO ONE LOVED YOU MORE THAN ME

NOW IM OLD AND BEATEN DOWN
MY SMILES TURNED TO A PERMANENT FROWN

I STAYED TO LONG THIS I KNOW
NOW ITS TIME FOR ME TO GO

BUT BEFORE I LEAVE I HOPE YOULL SEE
THAT BEING SO ANGRY IS NO WAY TO BE

I THINK I FINALLY UNDERSTAND
ITS TIME FOR ME TO TAKE A STAND

NOW I KNOW I DESERVE A HAPPY LIFE
SOMETHING I'LL NEVER HAVE IF I STAY YOUR WIFE

SO I'LL MOVE ON AND TRY TO HEAL
ITS TIME FOR ME TO TAKE THE WHEEL

BUT DONT WORRY I'LL SURVIVE
FOR LIFES JUST ONE BIG TEST DRIVE

I KNOW THAT GOD WILL SEE ME THROUGH
'HE KNOWS I'VE SEEN HELL' I WAS MARRIED TO YOU

SO I WRITE THIS NOW FOR WIFE NUMBER TWO
BECAUSE NO ONE DESERVES TO BE BLACK AND BLUE

DON'T BELIEVE HIS CHARM OR HIS LIES
LEAVE HIM BEFORE YOUR SPIRIT DIES

IF YOU DONT YOU'LL SOON FIND
HE'S NOT THE MAN YOU THOUGHT WAS KIND

SOON HE'LL HAVE YOU BEGGING HIM TO STAY
I KNOW IT SOUNDS CRAZY BUT THATS HIS WAY

HE SOMEHOW GETS DEEP IN YOUR HEAD
AND MAKES YOU WISH THAT YOU WERE DEAD

THEN HE 'LL HAVE YOU BELIEVING IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT
AND BEFORE YOU KNOW IT LIFE'S ONE BIG ASSAULT

AND JUST WHEN YOU REALIZE THAT YOU WANT TO LEAVE
HE'LL TELL YOU HE LOVES YOU AND YOU WILL BELIEVE .

SO PLEASE HEED MY WARNING AND GET ON WITH YOUR LIFE
YOU DONT WANT TO END UP LIKE HIS FIRST WIFE

Copyright © soulsearching43 ... [ 2007-02-04 10:55:35]
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Re: THE FIRST WIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 09:55:00 AM AEST
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let you be his only wife. if i have contact with Osama Bin laden, I will bomb your person.
girish

Re: THE FIRST WIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 05:06:18 PM AEST
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Wow, what a debut!!! Punch the page some more...you're Great at it!!!

BigLoveMuchPeace
~MisfitMe

Re: THE FIRST WIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 04:26:53 PM AEST
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i think this was written well, expressing much emotion that comes through very clearly. the whole capital thing is something i don't care much for, but the poem made up for it.

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