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Array ( [sid] => 131354 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => After-Snow [time] => 2007-02-04 09:33:02 [hometext] => Wrote this poem from the room at the top of the house as I watched some snow melt off my neighbours garage roof. [bodytext] =>

Fragments of the rain-drenched hue
Penetrate the steel concrete below
Emitting the Wondrous Sparkles
Of the After-Snow.

Pools of Cloud-song
Create the petrol tints of the sky
Like the stinging fields of gold
That, with energy wisps, pass us by.

Spiritual glaciers of white
Air-rumbles from an unknown height
Brilliance encapsulated upwards
Lighting speaks to the ground at night

Weather codes of future thought
Run towards the castle of the crow
Old pale ice melts into Rain-song
Pale ice becomes the After-Snow.

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After-Snow

Contributed by NDean on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 09:33:02 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Fragments of the rain-drenched hue
Penetrate the steel concrete below
Emitting the Wondrous Sparkles
Of the After-Snow.

Pools of Cloud-song
Create the petrol tints of the sky
Like the stinging fields of gold
That, with energy wisps, pass us by.

Spiritual glaciers of white
Air-rumbles from an unknown height
Brilliance encapsulated upwards
Lighting speaks to the ground at night

Weather codes of future thought
Run towards the castle of the crow
Old pale ice melts into Rain-song
Pale ice becomes the After-Snow.

Copyright © NDean ... [ 2007-02-04 09:33:02]
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Re: After-Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 01:10:40 PM AEST
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I simply must comment as I love poems inspired by nature and I can feel the muse in this write. I my opinion you may have done better by your inspiration if your free this piece from the chain of its rhyme scheme. There are other metrics to follow to honor such a moment of expression and your turns of phrase are tight and for me there is an obvious added effort to add this to your alliteration.

Good Job

Keep the Pen Flowing

Peace
Yangdantien

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