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Array ( [sid] => 131305 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blood that sustains me [time] => 2007-02-02 14:05:54 [hometext] => Imma Vampire RAWR >=3 This is one of my shorter poems [bodytext] => The taste of pure ecstasy, my heart given flight.
For how long I had hungered for this very night.
The countess’ daughter, a rare radiant catch.
On the bed she awaited, my obedient letch .

Revealing my fangs, of bright ivory color,
White and pure like the snows of the distant November.
Running my fingers through the flowing red hair.
Gently pulling it back, until her pale neck was bare.

Caressing the point of carnivorous intent;
My teeth plunged in deep, her fragrant neck bent.
The crimson blood trickled down her elegant skin.
Tainted by lust, this addiction of sin.

My thirst became quenched as her life slipped away.
A cold ravaged corpse, where her body once lay.
Every trickle of blood, every ounce of it drawn.
Restoring my power for the upcoming dawn.
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Blood that sustains me

Contributed by gravehorn on Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 02:05:54 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The taste of pure ecstasy, my heart given flight.
For how long I had hungered for this very night.
The countess’ daughter, a rare radiant catch.
On the bed she awaited, my obedient letch .

Revealing my fangs, of bright ivory color,
White and pure like the snows of the distant November.
Running my fingers through the flowing red hair.
Gently pulling it back, until her pale neck was bare.

Caressing the point of carnivorous intent;
My teeth plunged in deep, her fragrant neck bent.
The crimson blood trickled down her elegant skin.
Tainted by lust, this addiction of sin.

My thirst became quenched as her life slipped away.
A cold ravaged corpse, where her body once lay.
Every trickle of blood, every ounce of it drawn.
Restoring my power for the upcoming dawn.

Copyright Â© gravehorn ... [ 2007-02-02 14:05:54]
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Re: Blood that sustains me (User Rating: 1 )
by maestar on Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 02:24:32 PM AEST
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oooo creepy to say the least and great to say more, I felt like I was in an old fashioned vampire film, you know the ones with the hot english vamps.lol
nice one.

Re: Blood that sustains me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 06:00:28 PM AEST
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OOO another vampire writer sweet!

I loved the meter, flow and the darkness of this kissed with the romance as well. Nicely done

~Michelle~

Re: Blood that sustains me (User Rating: 1 )
by SilverMercury on Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 06:39:13 PM AEST
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This is beautiful >:3~

Re: Blood that sustains me (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 01:46:36 AM AEST
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Ahhh very beautiful write.
its nice to see another vampire writer here :)

The taste of pure ecstasy, my heart given flight.
For how long I had hungered for this very night.
The countess’ daughter, a rare radiant catch.

just love that.

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