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Array ( [sid] => 131290 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The beauty I see in her [time] => 2007-02-02 07:19:41 [hometext] => This is not the beauty of face but the beauty of love [bodytext] => Beauty as the female deer is she
This maiden has a relation with me
Tender is the water from coconut
And on me the same she does squirt

Black as the clouds spreads her hairs
The same does the waves from sea bears
The more love that comes from her tone
My mind carries the same in my intone

The flowers that give such aroma
Mingles with the honey in panorama
Such is the delight that really springs
When our minds in union clings

Her hands should become the prison
In which I lay myself for all frozen
This should happen all through my life
For which reason she has become my wife

Even in solitude I have no yearning
Her youth plays the part of delighting
Which brings, the beauty ardent in her
That is only for me, now and forever

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The beauty I see in her

Contributed by girish on Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 07:19:41 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Beauty as the female deer is she
This maiden has a relation with me
Tender is the water from coconut
And on me the same she does squirt

Black as the clouds spreads her hairs
The same does the waves from sea bears
The more love that comes from her tone
My mind carries the same in my intone

The flowers that give such aroma
Mingles with the honey in panorama
Such is the delight that really springs
When our minds in union clings

Her hands should become the prison
In which I lay myself for all frozen
This should happen all through my life
For which reason she has become my wife

Even in solitude I have no yearning
Her youth plays the part of delighting
Which brings, the beauty ardent in her
That is only for me, now and forever

Copyright © girish ... [ 2007-02-02 07:19:41]
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Re: The beauty I see in her (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 09:19:21 AM AEST
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beautifully written.. this is a very enjoyable piece of work.. great job

vampyress Jenni

Re: The beauty I see in her (User Rating: 1 )
by Packatack on Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 11:08:58 AM AEST
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What a great poem u wrote here. Thanks for sharing!

Re: The beauty I see in her (User Rating: 1 )
by heatherslostdreams on Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 07:04:13 PM AEST
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This poem is beautiful and full of love thank you for sharing and not being afraid to put your feelings out there like many are. Great Write.

your friend
Heather
aka
heatherslostdreams

P.S. thanks for the comment on my poem glad that i could return the favor!

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