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She is the silver lining
And with every tired beat
She bleeds through shining
A steady drip
A firm grip
Holding on
To the last drop of hope
Before its gone
Keepin' me strong to go on
She's that drive
Making me feel so alive
Day by day
Inspiring me in every way
To keep fighting
Keep writing
Believing
Achieving
She's my glimmer
That shimmer
Of perfection
My connection
The direction
Of destiny...
She is my destiny.
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Destined.

Contributed by bleedthelove on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 12:16:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Inside my broken heart
She is the silver lining
And with every tired beat
She bleeds through shining
A steady drip
A firm grip
Holding on
To the last drop of hope
Before its gone
Keepin' me strong to go on
She's that drive
Making me feel so alive
Day by day
Inspiring me in every way
To keep fighting
Keep writing
Believing
Achieving
She's my glimmer
That shimmer
Of perfection
My connection
The direction
Of destiny...
She is my destiny.

Copyright © bleedthelove ... [ 2007-02-01 12:16:35]
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Re: Destined. (User Rating: 1 )
by BornReckless on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 01:25:32 PM AEST
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"inside my broken heart she is the silver lining, and with every tired beat she bleeds through shining" ...that is some passionate writing. you are extremely talented

Re: Destined. (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 02:06:43 PM AEST
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excellent write
it has a nice quick flow

Re: Destined. (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 02:10:01 PM AEST
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Certainly more than a "glimmer" of talent in this work, but I'm sure you don't really need me to tell you what is obvious
Good write

Steve

Re: Destined. (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 02:28:56 PM AEST
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bleedthelove, Excellent poetic literature with such a deep meaning. Good job on this one.
Mickey Pig Knuckles

Re: Destined. (User Rating: 1 )
by SaintzAndSinnerz on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 06:59:14 PM AEST
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you never cease to amaze me bleedthelove. So beautiful.

Re: Destined. (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 09:00:59 PM AEST
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Another beautiful Innervision
well done.

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