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" Living Hell "

I destroy homes, I tear families apart
I will take your children and that痴 just the start

I am more valued than diamonds,more precious than gold
the sorrow I will bring, is a disastrous site to behold

I live all around you, in schools, in town
I am the rich, and I am the poor

I am always down the street
I am even next door

I am made in a lab, but not like one you壇 think
I can even be made, in your own kitchen sink

Made in your child痴 closet, even out in the woods
if this scares you to death, it certainly should

I have many names, I have one you know best
everyone痴 heard of me, my name is crystal meth

My power is awesome, try me and you値l see
but if you decide to try me, you may never break free

Just try me once, I might let you go
but if you try me twice, I will own your soul

When I possess you, you値l steal and you値l lie
you will do what you have to, just to get high

The crimes you commit for my narcotic charms
will be worth the pleasure you feel in your arms

You will lie to your mother, steal from your dad
when you see their tears, you will feel really sad

Forget about your morals, how you were raised
I will be your conscience, I will teach you my ways

I take kids from their parent痴, parent痴 from their kids
I take everything from you, even your pride will be hid

I will be there with you, where ever you are
I will always be with you, I will never be far

You値l give up on everything, your family, your home
your money, your friends, you値l be all alone

I will take and take from you, no more can you give
when I am finished, you値l be lucky to live

If you try me be warned, this is not a game
if I am given a chance, I値l drive you insane

I値l ravage your body, I値l control your mind
I値l own you completely, your soul will be mine

The night mares I値l give you, while lying in bed
my voices you値l hear, from inside of your head

The sweats, the shakes, the visions you see
I want you to know, these gifts are from me

By then its too late, you値l know in your heart
that you are now mine, and we値l never part

You will regret this, my users always do
you came to me! Not I to you!

Knowing this would happen, I know you were told
you knew my powers and chose to be bold

You could have said NO, then walked away
if you could live that day over, what would you say?

I am now you master, you are my slave
I will even take you, down to your grave!

Now that you met me, what will you do?
will you try me or not? Its all up to you!

I can show you more misery, than words can tell
come hold my hand, let me lead you to Hell.....


Penned By James L. McHenry

Copyright ゥ 2000 James L. McHenry

Copyright ゥ 2000 By Mickey Pig Knuckles

Copyright ゥ 2000 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)

Copyright ゥ 2000 HeartFelt TM

Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
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Living Hell

Contributed by MickeyPigKnuckles on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 11:16:29 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



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" Living Hell "

I destroy homes, I tear families apart
I will take your children and that痴 just the start

I am more valued than diamonds,more precious than gold
the sorrow I will bring, is a disastrous site to behold

I live all around you, in schools, in town
I am the rich, and I am the poor

I am always down the street
I am even next door

I am made in a lab, but not like one you壇 think
I can even be made, in your own kitchen sink

Made in your child痴 closet, even out in the woods
if this scares you to death, it certainly should

I have many names, I have one you know best
everyone痴 heard of me, my name is crystal meth

My power is awesome, try me and you値l see
but if you decide to try me, you may never break free

Just try me once, I might let you go
but if you try me twice, I will own your soul

When I possess you, you値l steal and you値l lie
you will do what you have to, just to get high

The crimes you commit for my narcotic charms
will be worth the pleasure you feel in your arms

You will lie to your mother, steal from your dad
when you see their tears, you will feel really sad

Forget about your morals, how you were raised
I will be your conscience, I will teach you my ways

I take kids from their parent痴, parent痴 from their kids
I take everything from you, even your pride will be hid

I will be there with you, where ever you are
I will always be with you, I will never be far

You値l give up on everything, your family, your home
your money, your friends, you値l be all alone

I will take and take from you, no more can you give
when I am finished, you値l be lucky to live

If you try me be warned, this is not a game
if I am given a chance, I値l drive you insane

I値l ravage your body, I値l control your mind
I値l own you completely, your soul will be mine

The night mares I値l give you, while lying in bed
my voices you値l hear, from inside of your head

The sweats, the shakes, the visions you see
I want you to know, these gifts are from me

By then its too late, you値l know in your heart
that you are now mine, and we値l never part

You will regret this, my users always do
you came to me! Not I to you!

Knowing this would happen, I know you were told
you knew my powers and chose to be bold

You could have said NO, then walked away
if you could live that day over, what would you say?

I am now you master, you are my slave
I will even take you, down to your grave!

Now that you met me, what will you do?
will you try me or not? Its all up to you!

I can show you more misery, than words can tell
come hold my hand, let me lead you to Hell.....


Penned By James L. McHenry

Copyright ゥ 2000 James L. McHenry

Copyright ゥ 2000 By Mickey Pig Knuckles

Copyright ゥ 2000 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)

Copyright ゥ 2000 HeartFelt TM

Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion




Copyright ツゥ MickeyPigKnuckles ... [ 2007-02-01 11:16:29]
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Re: Living Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 12:34:45 PM AEST
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Truer words were never spoken, a most essential peice of writting if ever there was. great style, and as for the content, that speaks for it self.


thank you kindly for the comment

myheartsvoice


Re: Living Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 09:13:19 PM AEST
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I like the way this flowed


Re: Living Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by heatherslostdreams on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 10:42:57 PM AEST
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Hey i just read this i think that it has a great meaning. I have been in homes were drugs have taking control and what you say is true things will never be the same. I wish that more people could read this and see what really goes on because all the ads that you see and stuff on t.v. doesn't come close to what really happens but i feel that your poem does express that thank you for writing this it touched me keep it coming!
heather


Re: Living Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 11:25:59 AM AEST
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So very very true. Very nicely written.


Re: Living Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 05:59:53 PM AEST
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mmmmmm.....long yet interesting. loved the concept and your vision about the drug. never took it and never will so i can not relate to the words; however i have seen others and truth be told to your words. thank you for sharing.


Re: Living Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 03:22:05 PM AEST
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Tweakers beware that there are hells worse then the one we make for ourselves and often find ourselves in. However being a care giver it is exactly this kind of fear and ignorance of an afterlife (for what is worth) that ultimately scares one into a 'what is it all for' mentality which then leads to the fleet of time induced to continue using till utterly dysfunctional. So much that the"Living Hell" is also then shared by those who give help and especially their families. A very provocative write.

Well Done

Peace
Yangdantien




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