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Array ( [sid] => 131243 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Feelings That Hurt [time] => 2007-01-31 22:22:01 [hometext] => This is a poem i wrote at a dark place in my life! [bodytext] => I hurt
I wanna give up
I'm so numb
How will all this end
I feel I'm losing my sanity
I feel different
I feel I don't know who I am
I feel I'm ruining his life
I feel like I'm a burden
To all expecially myself
I feel my life is down the drain
I feel as a disappointment
I can't change how I feel
I need help and happiness
But yet I push everyone away
What has happened to me
Why can't I change this
Why do I spend time crying
When I could be living happy
Who wants to deal with me like this
Who can I reach out to
I wanna love and be loved
I wanna be normal
I don't wanna be like this
Now how do I change [comments] => 3 [counter] => 319 [topic] => 39 [informant] => heatherslostdreams [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Feelings That Hurt

Contributed by heatherslostdreams on Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 10:22:01 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I hurt
I wanna give up
I'm so numb
How will all this end
I feel I'm losing my sanity
I feel different
I feel I don't know who I am
I feel I'm ruining his life
I feel like I'm a burden
To all expecially myself
I feel my life is down the drain
I feel as a disappointment
I can't change how I feel
I need help and happiness
But yet I push everyone away
What has happened to me
Why can't I change this
Why do I spend time crying
When I could be living happy
Who wants to deal with me like this
Who can I reach out to
I wanna love and be loved
I wanna be normal
I don't wanna be like this
Now how do I change

Copyright © heatherslostdreams ... [ 2007-01-31 22:22:01]
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Re: Feelings That Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 01:17:59 AM AEST
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One only changes if one wants to.

Simple as that.

Getting older....that's different....
that's more like watching everything around you change

you get used to that...

Re: Feelings That Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by trulovaAKAthetruth on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 05:55:17 AM AEST
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take a good look at me i cry
so others dont have 2

your buddy t-luv

Re: Feelings That Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 09:57:15 AM AEST
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this is a very good raw emotional write.. I can relate to this write in my past.. well you gotta learn to like yourself and think more positive.. I know its annoying to hear that cuz i used to get annoyed hearing that but its the truth you gotta like yourself and be a bit more optimistic before anything can get better.. very good write though

vampyress Jenni

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