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I know what you see
All these flaws when you look at me
Tossing away all the good for a few little kinks
But I don't care what you think
I don't care what you see
I am me and that's all I'll ever be
I'm proud of myself, and I'll never sink
As low as to feel the same as you
And judge you for your looks
And not for your personal outlooks
To myself I'm always true
How about you? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 21 [informant] => desolantdreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

shallow

Contributed by desolantdreamer on Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 09:42:40 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I know what you think
I know what you see
All these flaws when you look at me
Tossing away all the good for a few little kinks
But I don't care what you think
I don't care what you see
I am me and that's all I'll ever be
I'm proud of myself, and I'll never sink
As low as to feel the same as you
And judge you for your looks
And not for your personal outlooks
To myself I'm always true
How about you?

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Re: shallow (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 12:54:59 AM AEST
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Be simple, not shallow. ^_^

I only post if they make me think
I think that's compliment enough.

bye now

always, abraham

Re: shallow (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 09:59:58 AM AEST
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i like this write.. its very up front and honest and it conveys a great messege.. always be yourself and if soemone don't like you for you then screw them lolz awesome write

vampyress Jenni

Re: shallow (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 12:04:22 AM AEST
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well done

Re: shallow (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 02:47:17 PM AEST
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you sound so confident in your convictions that its almost like i feel it through your words.

it is very direct and i love stuff like that. it gets to the point with limited words but has better affect than loads of words.

thanks for sharing

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