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Array ( [sid] => 131184 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Underneath Her Skin [time] => 2007-01-30 17:34:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She sits outside
and starts to write,
to a love that she tries to erase
but can't escape.
To learn that he has found
someone new
hurts her bleeding heart,
for he has made
a profound mark,
underneath her skin.
And even though
time has moved along,
she still sits and awaits
his return,
for his warm embrace
still lingers...
underneath her skin. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 282 [topic] => 14 [informant] => bluestars [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Underneath Her Skin

Contributed by bluestars on Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 05:34:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

She sits outside
and starts to write,
to a love that she tries to erase
but can't escape.
To learn that he has found
someone new
hurts her bleeding heart,
for he has made
a profound mark,
underneath her skin.
And even though
time has moved along,
she still sits and awaits
his return,
for his warm embrace
still lingers...
underneath her skin.

Copyright © bluestars ... [ 2007-01-30 17:34:18]
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Re: Underneath Her Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 05:58:49 PM AEST
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a beautiful write.. I loved the wording and the flow and the expression.. great job

vampyress Jenni

Re: Underneath Her Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 07:44:00 PM AEST
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You made the reader see and feel your words , nicely done

Michelle

Re: Underneath Her Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by Ratwick on Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 02:03:04 AM AEST
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Isn't it crap how love lingers long after the lover is gone? Such a gyp.
Really good write!!!
Write On
Peace

Re: Underneath Her Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 12:46:45 PM AEST
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beautiful...

love n' hugs nessa

Re: Underneath Her Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by beefybeebuzz on Saturday, 15th December 2007 @ 07:05:08 AM AEST
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I like the way i could imagine what you wrote i felt the emotion GOOD WORK!

Re: Underneath Her Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by CharM on Wednesday, 1st May 2013 @ 07:11:46 PM AEST
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nicely written. gave me goosebumps. =)

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