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Array ( [sid] => 131110 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => because your not mine [time] => 2007-01-28 21:06:41 [hometext] => comments are appreciated [bodytext] => just sitting here
thinking of you
for the last time
cause your not mine

i realize the tears
are all falling down
but i cant help but smile
cause its all over now

im getting strong
and im moving on
you werent too good to be true
you were always just you

there was nothing but pain
and theres nothing to gain
you were always so distant
and the feelings resistant

it was never real
i didnt understand
why i couldnt feel
you holding my hand

i have to let go
but youll never know
i was dependent on you
and all the things that you do

and then you turned your back
and you shoved it in my face
and i wish i could go back
i wish it could all be erased

i never wanted to love you
now i know i dont have to
your not what i need
the feeling was greed

im letting go
so walk away
leave me here
ill be ohkay

cause im just sitting here
thinking of you
for the last time
cause your not mine
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 48 [informant] => broken_not_beautiful [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

because your not mine

Contributed by broken_not_beautiful on Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 09:06:41 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

just sitting here
thinking of you
for the last time
cause your not mine

i realize the tears
are all falling down
but i cant help but smile
cause its all over now

im getting strong
and im moving on
you werent too good to be true
you were always just you

there was nothing but pain
and theres nothing to gain
you were always so distant
and the feelings resistant

it was never real
i didnt understand
why i couldnt feel
you holding my hand

i have to let go
but youll never know
i was dependent on you
and all the things that you do

and then you turned your back
and you shoved it in my face
and i wish i could go back
i wish it could all be erased

i never wanted to love you
now i know i dont have to
your not what i need
the feeling was greed

im letting go
so walk away
leave me here
ill be ohkay

cause im just sitting here
thinking of you
for the last time
cause your not mine

Copyright © broken_not_beautiful ... [ 2007-01-28 21:06:41]
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Re: because your not mine (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 09:26:35 PM AEST
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a great release of feelings.. its good to know your moving on.. hope things get better.. this was a very emotional write.. a very felt poem thanks for sharing

vampyress jenni

Re: because your not mine (User Rating: 1 )
by LouisaMontagu on Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 09:07:54 AM AEST
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well done, simple, self explanatory, subtle and an easy read - We've all been there. -x-

Re: because your not mine (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 10:57:17 AM AEST
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Wow even though the poems content is of sadness the emotional drippings jumps right off the page to your readers through the heart of a very talented author. You are so awesome in every meaning of the word. So pleased to see you reaching for that poetic pen as now your readers can continue to grin.

Mickey Pig Knuckles :)

Re: because your not mine (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 02:12:52 AM AEST
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great write. i think we all can relate to this, you captured the feeling incredibly well.

Re: because your not mine (User Rating: 1 )
by jjones12 on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 09:34:21 PM AEST
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wow....you've been through a lot...it seems that your broken heart will never heal but it takes time and nothing but time....don't worry, stay as strong as you can be and your life will get so much better....i've had a coupple of experieces and no what your going through..mine was a 2 1/2 year relationship...hope yours wasn't that long...

Re: because your not mine (User Rating: 1 )
by Tory on Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 12:39:07 PM AEST
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Very good!!!

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